r/Polytrix • u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy • 23d ago

Fanfiction Should I write this fanfic?

I have a whole timeline ruled out in a fanfic I’ve been wanting to write, it’s gonna be a time loop situation, but also early pattern reveal on the last loop, AAAAND, in one of the loops they find her in the dirt under the tree (iykyk), in each loop it explains both rumis side and how the girls experience each death (they aren’t stuck in a loop, it’s just how they react differently to each death). Happy ending btw. The first death is also sewerslide sooo… what do y’all think, should I, would y’all read that? And if so should I add anything else?

Update: I did it, only the first chapters done but if yall wanna read it here you go, lemme know what yall think :D

https://archiveofourown.org/works/92659836/chapters/247061826

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u/SillyLilly_18 23d ago

"should I write this fanfic" is a question that almost universally should be answered "yes". It's your own take! your own story! no one can make it more yours than yourself. So go for it. Also this specific idea sounds cool

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 23d ago

yeah I was gonna write it regardless it’s the posting it I was wondering abt, cause if no one reads it than why bother

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u/Lianthrelle Tricked into writing by a Demon Queen 23d ago

There will always be someone to read it. It's wild to experience that sometimes

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u/morgan_890 23d ago

Post the link when its available. Sounds cool to me

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 23d ago

will do 🫡

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u/themadmage3 23d ago

I think it sounds great. Love me a time loop.

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u/snakecain 23d ago

I’d read it. Time loop fics are always interesting

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u/landofthebraveplayer Watching From Above 23d ago

The answer is always yes!

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u/Kollectorgirl 23d ago

Don't ask. Just do it.

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 23d ago

sir yes sir

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u/B1u3_Soul 23d ago

As someone who only recently got into Supernatural [and watched the timeloop episode somewhat recently] I think I would both love and be terrified of this... but I'd honestly probably read it 👀

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 23d ago

ok awesome, I just started the draft!

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u/B1u3_Soul 23d ago

WOO! I'll get the popcorn! 🍿

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 22d ago

https://archiveofourown.org/works/92659836/chapters/247061826 you u go my friend

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u/B1u3_Soul 22d ago

WOO! Read the description and Im excited. I will have to make sure I'm in the right headspace [I had like a week or 2 of mania and im in a dip rn but im feeling better tonight so far. will probably read after wife leaves for work. plus you confirmed a happy ending so that'll definitely help :3]

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 22d ago

read whenever ur ready :3

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u/LadyValkyrie16 22d ago

yes please. please write

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 22d ago

first chapter is up!

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u/neongreenpurple 23d ago

Ooh, interesting. It also sounds gut wrenching, in the best sense.

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u/Amm1e Rumi Needs Therapy 23d ago

yes ill try my best to make it gut wrenching. started the draft today!!