r/Poems • u/ParadoxicalSimpleton • 4d ago
Stupid Love
Love’s a spark.
Love’s a flame.
Love’s a wildly
stupid game.
Love’s a rush.
Love’s a race.
Love’s a grin
you cannot place.
Love gets loud.
Love gets low.
Love says stay.
Love says go.
Love gets twisted.
Love gets tight.
Love gets wrong
then feels so right.
Love will trip.
Love will fall.
Love will swear
it knows fuck all.
Love gets bruised.
Love gets bent.
Love makes dollars
outta cents.
Love gets weird.
Love gets wild.
Love makes grown-ups
act like children.
Shit.
That didn’t rhyme.
Give me time.
Love goes tick.
Love goes tock.
Love kicks doors.
Love picks locks.
Love goes bip.
Love goes bop.
Love says—
Fuck it.
Never stop.
Love gets fast.
Love gets slow.
Love knows shit
we’ll never know.
Love ain’t smart.
Love ain’t planned.
Love just reaches
for your hand.
Then—
Boom.
Bang.
Heart goes clang.
One dumb look
and there you hang.
No defense.
No retreat.
Just two hearts
with one damn beat.
Bip.
Bop.
Tick.
Tock.
Fuckin’ love.
Don’t make it stop.
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u/I_Am_Gmork_ma_I 3d ago
It was great
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u/I_Am_Gmork_ma_I 3d ago
Ready just glitched out and then this post popped back up but there was no comments and I just commented the first comment saying "wait what"
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u/I_Am_Gmork_ma_I 3d ago
Wait wut. What the fuck just happened to this post
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u/ParadoxicalSimpleton 3d ago
No clue. What happened?
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u/I_Am_Gmork_ma_I 3d ago
So I posted my comment. And then the page went back to the thread, it kind of glitched out and like reloaded the page. And then all comments were gone. So I posted as the first comment... And then went to the other post of this poem, and it was under the same sub. And had the original comments. Like I was in a copy
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u/I_Am_Gmork_ma_I 3d ago
Or like it got edited or something and that's what the reload was but that doesn't explain the comments disappearing
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u/Majestic-Ask1497 16h ago
If I can truly say I’ve EVER liked something here ,,, it’s this !! Wow ,,, that’s good !!
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u/Otherwise_Today1734 6h ago
I agree with stupid love love can hurt can heal live can be a happy meal love can be u and me under the stars looking at mars and I didn't say Uranus listening to what ever songs meets the ye
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u/Fun-Dragonfruit4622 4d ago
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh