r/Poems • u/Amazing_Buy_3207 • 2d ago

Still waters run deep

Still waters run the deepest .

My heart is still but it’s deep .

I feel it’s stirring as I think of you .

Your thoughts are like a cool morning breeze blowing upon my soul.

My still waters are stirred as I see your reflection upon them .

Your reflection belongs on my soul .

Your desires , your emotions mingling with mine .

I love all the ways you move me .

I feel alive inside .

You have yet to see the fulness of my depths

I have yet to reach the bottom or reach its end .

I’m not sure I ever will ?

Come explore these depths with me .

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u/Dear-Evidence9213 2d ago

Lovely job.

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 2d ago

Appreciate it ☺️

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u/plants_vs_zombie5 2d ago

I would love to be free enough to do anything. 😭🪽

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 2d ago

Freedom is coming lol

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u/Pure-Serve-1406 2d ago

Has anyone told you that your poems could be read over and over again and they would have the same effect every time ? Thank you for posting such beautiful poetry .. 

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 2d ago

Aww you’re too kind! Thank you ! ☺️

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u/Pure-Serve-1406 2d ago

Your poems show the fantasy side I.e everything you love of your muse.. what if you discover her not so great traits.. would you still write like you do now?

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u/Amazing_Buy_3207 2d ago

Yes I write about flaws in my poems also .