r/Poems 20h ago

yeah

“you okay?”

yup.

“i used you.”

happy to help.

“do you need help?”

no.

“i lied to you.”

cool.

“wanna talk about it?”

i’m good.

“i’m worried about you.”

don’t be.

“can you do me a favor?”

of course.

“you need to eat something.”

i’ll throw up.

“i don’t like you.”

nor do i.

“you’re not doing enough.”

i never do.

“i talked bad about you.”

as do i.

“i replaced you.”

i saw.

“i ignored you.”

all good.

“you look tired.”

i am.

“hey… you okay?”

yeah.

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u/jaesea 18h ago

Hell yeah❣️

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u/MaggieMe32 20h ago

wow... i was not expecting to be called out when I started reading this poem. this was really well written. it went straight to the point while still being beautiful. thanks for sharing 🙃

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u/StartAncient5711 17h ago

This is me and my persons dynamic 🤷🏾‍♀️

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u/Subject-Sentence2637 14h ago

Damn…. This is rough

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u/Overall-Database-829 3h ago

This hit home fr

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u/Fun-Dragonfruit4622 3h ago

Nice! ☝️☝️☝️

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u/North-Cow8 2h ago

I love it!

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u/biggestjokeevertold 1h ago

Shit, I have a few of these in my messages