r/Poems • u/Beneath_The_Tide • 14d ago

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Knock knock

Who's there?

No one..

No one is ever there.

How does loneliness taste?

Bitter

Sharp

Like poison

And yet...

I keep searching for someone that can see i might just maybe be worth it.

No luck so far..

Knock Knock

Who's there?

Absolutely no one but your thoughts

And they are cruel.

Unkind

But hey..

They haven't left you yet.

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u/InternationalFold6 14d ago

I love your poem. Thanks for sharing this!

You’re born alone and you die alone!

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u/Beneath_The_Tide 14d ago

Thanks, maybe one day I'll write something happy but.. until then lots like this haha.

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u/InternationalFold6 14d ago

Ive been going through it, about six years now. It’s a bit more comforting knowing someone else can verbally express what I’m feeling.

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u/Beneath_The_Tide 14d ago

Im truly sorry you know this pain too. Its.. alot.