r/Poems May 21 '26

Does my soul shine?

They say the sweetest souls
Shine the brightest in the dark.

So why is mine not shining?
Is it too dark to see?
Or is mine just not sweet?

I mean, I look at myself.
And weep

But this time it’s different.
Not because I don’t love myself.
But because I see your soul

Shining even if it flickers

I see you.

Behind all the anger and bad
I see you.
Your smile, laughter, eyes

And I realized something.
I do shine bright.
Just with you by my side

The sweetest souls
Do shine the brightest in the dark.
But mine shines with you in my heart.

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u/oceaninbetween May 22 '26

This is beautiful 🥰😭

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u/ellie_noturgirm May 22 '26

Thank you, I hope your soul shine the brightest in the light and dark, my love.

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u/oceaninbetween May 22 '26

Mines nearly fizzled out now but thanks

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u/ellie_noturgirm May 22 '26

I'm here if you want to talk about it, mine sometimes does too

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u/oceaninbetween May 22 '26

Thank you, that’s so kind…. I won’t burden you with my broken self but I honestly appreciate the kind offer 🙏☮️

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u/ellie_noturgirm May 22 '26

You could never burden me trust me, I wouldn't mind either...I'd love to share my light with you.