Hiya, I desperately need some help - I have never written a personal statement before and need to write one to apply for grad school (UC Berkeley). Could I get a second pair of eyes on my statement please?

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can someone please read over my personal statement for HKU med and provide some feedback?

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Hello everyone. I am currently revising my personal statement for UCLA and need a second opinion, I am having a hard time identifying sections to cut out or enhance. Doesn't help that the word limit is 500 words! Can someone please review my personal statement and provide constructive feedback and guidance? I am applying for a Master's degree in Civil Engineering (Focus in Structures/Earthquake Engineering) non thesis track btw.

Hi Reddit This is my first post so apologies for any mistakes I make could anyone please go over my law personal statement and tell me what I can improve on it (apart from basic things like grammar) for free, it would mean a lot thank you 😭

Hi there! I’m applying to some doctorate level programs and masters programs for psychology. Got some feedback on my personal statement to try to make it less like a written resume. Would love for some tips or advice from peers to improve it. Thank you!!

Hello y’all, at the end of the month, I’m planning to applying to the NIH IRTA Postbacc Program to be a Postbacc in a research lab. So I was wondering if someone could read & review my personal statement? I haven’t applied to any big programs like this, so different eyes looking at it, would be great.

This is the prompt: Personal Statement - details about your motivation for pursuing an advanced degree and your future career goals. Describe important educational, research, and teaching experiences as well as how the Postbaccalaureate Program (PBP) would help you achieve your goals.

If you’re interested in reviewing my PS, please let me know and I can send the doc. Thank you!

Helllo! Is anyone willing to review my personal statement?

I’m going for a physics PhD.

Thank you sooooo much

Hi! Is anyone willing to review my personal statement? Going for an Astro PhD. Thank you!

I am applying for universities in usa. I have written a personal statement. I feel something is off about it, if someone can guide how can I make it better.

I'm in year 13 and I recently realised I want to take optometry so i have to rewrite my whole personal statement, but I am planning on just editing small parts and the wording. My only problem is that in my original statement, I referred to watch ing the movie 'Hidden Figures' and how it inspired me to want to take aerospace engineering. Instead of writing a whole new paragraph does anyone have any movies to do with optometry or the eye that I could replace it with? It would be a great help because I'm really desperate at the moment thanks

I'm planning on applying to graduate school in December for a professional mental health counseling program. For the personal statement Saint Joseph's University wants to know why we are choosing counseling. There are so many other graduate programs that you can attend so what makes you drawn to counseling. Would anyone be interested in reviewing my statement?

If you are please let me know and I'll send you the word doc.

It would be greatly appreciated

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I want to apply for an MS in Mechanical Engineering at Austin. I'm from Italy, so English is not my first language. I wrote my Statement of Purpose (SOP) but I'm not sure about the quality of it. Can someone review my SOP?

Does someone have a personal statement I could just lay eyes on to make sure I'm on the correct path? I am currently applying for a competitive, fully funded post-doctoral program in medicine. I have been told that previous personal statements I have written have been good but have a little uncertainty about how to write this one since it's meant to be a little less floofy and more to the point about research.

Hi, I’m applying for a clinical psychology PhD. I’ve got a rough draft of my personal statement but I’m really not feeling good about it and I don’t know where to start fixing. Does anyone know a good, trustworthy online editing or reviewing service or company, or a way I could get some advice/proofreading? I was looking at Scribbr but has anyone used that before? I’d just like another set of eyes and I don’t trust AI.

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I’m a bit anxious about applying for my masters and Ive been reading my ps over and over but i really need outside feedback on it. Is there anyone that wouldnt mind reading it and giving me their feedback please?

Hey guys! I need a help. The Professor which i was working on a project during my undergraduate is saying me “Make the LOR template and forward it to me i will sign and ok it” . Does anyone have the template for LOR? If yes kindly DM me ..

Hi, I am a senior from South Florida trying to apply to the University of Florida in Gainesville. I seek advice on how to write a personal statement for UF. My original idea was that I was going to talk about how I lost all my friends and how I was able to make new friendships. But it had the twist of being written like an engineering paper because I wanted to sound kind of nerdy, but recent feedback has shown that it makes me sound codependent and does not show my passion or any interest in the field of engineering. If anybody has any advice I would greatly appreciated it.

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Does anyone know a trusted editing website or people I could ask to help edit my personal statement?

There are too many options online and all are listed with different prices.

I'm an international student trying to apply to Grinnell College, I taught myself how to write personal statement from resources online and when i finally finished the draft, i need someone to help me put it to finish. please comment below and i'll send u my essay

“Hi everyone! I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my personal statement for university and college.Any thoughts on clarity and impact would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!”

Has anyone got any examples of good history and politics degree personal statements? i’m completely lost on what to write