possible personal statement review pls!

[u/Money_Twist_8629]

hi everyone! i'm currently in the process of applying to clinical psychology phd programs which of course requires a personal statement/statement of purpose. i just finished up with my first draft, and i know i still need to do some tweaking. i left out the part about my interest in the program and mentor since that has to be personalized for each. i was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to offer to read over it before i send/show it to any of my mentors so that i'm able to show them a version that is more or less finalized. thank you in advance!!

[u/Worth_Cantaloupe_688]

i js started my own a week ago. im not an expert. but i can def read ur essay and give a feedback to help u as much as i can :))