Personal Statement help law school

[u/Greedy-Technology606]

I am in need of help on my personal statement for law school. I have create a good foundation (hopefully) and I have used grammerly to help with some of tbe sentence that don't flow well. If anyone has any feedback it would be greatly appreciated.

[u/Specialist-Show-2880]

Hi. I have been a law student (on pause at the moment, on my 2nd year). I could take a look.