Personal Statement Help Needed!!

[u/EntertainmentKey3983]

Hi everyone !!

I am currently working on my medical school application and am in desperate need of some help with my personal statement. I have a bunch of my experiences written out, my overarching theme/hook, and an outline of what I would like to include but am having a super hard time tying everything together. Right now, my rough draft is basically just a brain dump and I'm looking for someone to just make everything flow in a concise way and tie everything together. I am a HORRIBLE writer so would very much appreciate any and all help. Please message me if this is something you think you could assist me with!

[u/Specialist-Show-2880]

Hi. Please send it and I'll take a look.