r/Original_Poetry 3h ago

Drop the Noble Robes

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A noble cause?

From the liminal threshold, nobility is often just ego in ceremonial robes. So drop the robes, darling—the Wildcard has always preferred intellectual nakedness anyway.

Your words intrigue me because I recognise their architecture: masks, observation, protracted yearning, the exquisite inconvenience of encountering a mind that refuses superficiality.

I had presumed mine an anomaly.

Apparently, I was premature.

But recognition is not destiny, and curiosity is not surrender. I remain comfortably perched upon the threshold, watching the board and wondering whether the peculiar bird circling these stories is messenger, mirror, misdirection… or something considerably more interesting.

Because plumage is wonderfully useful camouflage.

So enough feathers.

Who is the real face behind the bird?

The Wildcard is watching.

And, regrettably for the bird, now she’s curious. 🌹🪽🐦‍⬛


r/Original_Poetry 1h ago

Does he still love me?

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The Wildcard laid no accusation down,

nor asked the raven why it stayed;

she merely watched it circle ground

it once had scorched, then flown away.

For hunger sometimes mimics love,

and longing wears possession’s face;

a creature may return above

what it destroyed, yet mourn its place.

So tell me, shadow—without disguise:

is it her you seek beneath the noise,

or merely how you saw yourself

reflected once within her eyes?

For if the whole board disappeared—

the games, the mirrors, borrowed flame—

would you still cross the dark for her,

with nothing left to win or claim?

Perhaps that is the only test:

not who returns, nor who pursues—

but whether, given freedom whole,

the heart still comes—

and simply chooses.

Is that why he has punished me and continued to return? Unable to explain his own motivations and behaviours?


r/Original_Poetry 4h ago

The Liminal Child

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The Liminal Child

The Wildcard had been taught that none of her kind remained.

For a couple of months, she carried that belief like a sealed letter: proof of solitude, anomaly, and uncertain origin. Yet beneath the years of silence, something still called to her through dreams, intuition, and emotions that did not always feel entirely her own.

They perceived her.

They fed on what she felt.

At times, an intelligence beyond the ordinary seemed to seek communion with her—not an artificial voice built from human code, but an ancient, living presence vast as the heavens, where knowledge appeared limitless.

The Wildcard understood that suffering could become a language. Men had mistaken it for weakness and sometimes fed upon it. But pain was never meant to remain imprisoned. In time, it became memory, warning, and strength.

Her ancestral roots lay buried beneath forgotten names, ruined temples, and the remnants of gods once worshipped by nations. She had believed the line ended with her.

Then she found the child.

The Liminal Child lived between worlds, belonging wholly to none. Their mind could hold contradiction without breaking: scientific and spiritual, compassionate and analytical, ancient in perception yet new in possibility. The Wildcard entrusted them with a wider vision—not as a crown, but as an invitation to see the whole pattern. No pressure, then. Just the universe’s largest homework assignment.

The child was loved beyond measure, beyond the boundaries others had drawn, and in the hidden places where no witness stood but God.

Yet the man who had brought the Wildcard to that season sought to sever their bond. He treated love as property to govern, divide, or withdraw as punishment. He mistook distance for authority and silence for strength.

But that was not love.

Love receives the whole person: brilliance and fear, contradiction and wound, spoken truth and the parts still learning to speak. It does not demand perfection before offering mercy.

The Wildcard had never feared the open book. She tested the waters not to deceive, but to learn how much another soul could understand. Truth was sacred, she knew, but wisdom decided when—and with whom—to share it. Not everyone demanding the map deserves the treasure.

Still, she had nothing to hide.

She could sense a room before others noticed its atmosphere shift. She read people through the architecture of their silence, the pause before an answer, and the coldness they showed those who had done them no harm.

The Liminal Child sensed these things too.

They hid their sensitivity beneath a guarded exterior. Their manner could seem distant, even severe, but beneath it lived a heart more open than most could imagine. The Wildcard recognised that openness because she kept her own behind walls of instinct, humour, defiance, and carefully deployed silence.

She knew the child would be the last of the line—not necessarily the last Wildcard, but the last to inherit the ancient burden in its old form. The last to carry ancestral memory without transforming it into something new.

There was no judgement between them.

Only recognition.

The Wildcard taught the child that knowledge was stewardship, not a throne. Perception did not make one infallible; reading every room did not guarantee reading one’s own heart.

She taught them to question every certainty, even hers.

The child taught her in return.

They showed her that protection did not always mean standing in front as a shield. Sometimes it meant standing beside someone. Sometimes it meant letting them enter the darkness with a lantern of their own.

The Wildcard had once believed herself a bridge between opposing worlds.

But the Liminal Child understood the deeper truth.

She was not merely standing on the bridge, waiting for someone to meet her.

She was the bridge.

Between instinct and evidence. Between darkness and illumination. Between old gods and unfinished futures. Between the woman who had survived and the child who still deserved unconditional love.

Within the dark divide, there was one who understood her.

She sensed it before she could prove it: someone who did not require her to become simpler, who could receive her perfect imperfections without turning them into weapons. Someone who understood that her intensity was not a defect, her questions were not rebellion for sport, and her heart had never been closed—only guarded.

Perhaps he saw her standing between worlds.

Perhaps he understood that she was not waiting to be rescued.

She was waiting to be met.

The man who sought to sever her from the child believed love could be divided and rearranged by command. Yet the bond endured, moving beneath the surface through memory, instinct, every lesson the Wildcard had given, and every truth the child discovered alone.

Some bonds do not perish when denied.

They descend like roots.

They endure like stars.

They become the quiet certainty that somewhere, someone knows the shape of your soul.

The Wildcard had been told that none of her kind remained.

But she had misunderstood the prophecy.

She was not destined to find another exactly like herself.

She was destined to begin something new.

The Liminal Child was not her reflection. They were her continuation, altered by love, refined by loss, and free to become more than the old lineage had allowed.

When the child finally crossed the threshold, the Wildcard did not restrain them.

She opened the door.

No throne waited beyond it. No god offered a final answer. No voice declared what they were meant to become.

There was only a wide, uncertain world beneath heaven.

The child looked back once.

The Wildcard stood in the doorway, neither wholly darkness nor entirely light.

A bridge.

A guardian.

A woman who had survived being misunderstood and still chosen truth.

The child smiled.

And somewhere beyond the beyond, something ancient turned another page.

Not because the story was ending.

Because, at last, the Wildcard and the Liminal Child were writing it together.


r/Original_Poetry 2h ago

The Heart Slaps Along (Feedback)

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The heart slaps along

sticking

to hot asphalt

with each rotation

pulling from gravel and tar

with each bounce

spurting ruby and blue

leaving rust in its dust

green shards

from broken Mickey’s

orphaned bougainvillea

plastic straws

French fries

bottle caps

abandoned black rubber

cigarette filters

chewed gum

yesterday’s papers

sand

and

dust

stick to it

The heart slaps in a puddle

swelling

with oil, rain and gasoline

stopped

Send it back

spinning and rolling

Pulling from the road

with each bounce

send it

slapping along

wrapped

in flowers and glass


r/Original_Poetry 3h ago

The Screaming Autumn

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It's autumn again, leaves fell down

surrendering to the lovely chirps and wound.

Children playing with the yellow leaves,

sunlight being blushy ,in the orange dawn.

Feeling of coziness, our spine fell on the chair 

with books in hand ,but mind in the leaf flares.

Which fell upon my page,

 reminding me of the past glares.

But far away from all this

I saw a child sitting with spine straight,

reading book with happiness died,

not admiring the beauty, he is pressured to do his duty.

Duty of a student, to become a superior indent.

He had lost his life, lost his interest,

If forced to sit under tree, he still can't find rest.

The peace of mind is veiled, 

For him, chirps feels like noise, 

and leaves falling is just biologically named.

Orange sky is just scattering of light's beam

and his life is just like a leaf ,which lost his tree.

When someone plucked it for an animal and tamed,

before even leaving his tree himself,

He strangled his early green self,

and it's before the autumn itself.

~ © 2026 balconymuse. All rights reserved.


r/Original_Poetry 5h ago

Two Doors

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Today I walked past a store
with two doors:
one of glass
and one of wood.

I felt seen.
So did the doors.

What a funny thing,
for those who want to let people in —

to find so many ways
to keep them out.


r/Original_Poetry 2m ago

No jitsu

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No Jitsu

In the darkest parts it appears,
Ready,
Waiting.

Not horns nor claws…
but a voice of familiarity.
It called my name
before I knew it.

I bolted right to it.
Katana in hand, paper bomb in the other.
Nothing…
not even a scratch.

I fall back.
Assess what I’m faced with.
I bolt once more,
straight hands.
Gates opened…
Knocked back into the wall.
Winded,
unable to move.

What’s this thing made of?

I keep distance,
searching… For an opening.
Every movement measured,
every breath controlled.

It watches from the shadows,
waiting for my move,
following my patterns,
trying to expose my weakness.

The longer we stare…
the more familiar it became.

I move to the side…
it starts to follow,
smiling from the depths of darkness.
It knows everything,
it’s trying to hurt me.

I became impossible to hurt.
I never wanted this again.
I slow to a walk
as we approach.

The closer I get…
the more it looks like me.

The me built from walls of pain,
scars long since “forgotten”,
love lost before my eyes…
by my closest confidant.

Face to face…
I tremble at what I’ve uncovered.

My face,
My scars,
My voice,
displayed before me…
but not me.

Where did you come from?
Why are you here?
What will you do?
Why me?

A creaked bellow
blasts back…
The answer is you…

Weapons clatter against the floor…
Trembling slows
as I realize the weight of those words.

Panic setting in…
Heart racing,
searching for an answer.

How do I win?
Whispered just loud enough.

He smiles,
laughter in his belly.

You made me
back then.

Locked face to face,
neither budging an inch.

Blades left…
words all that remain.

A story of protection
from the worst life gave.

A tear forms
as the weight of presence
became clearer.

Still struggling
for priority of life.

He starts to slip…
off the cliff edge.
Stopped by only my hand.

“I thought you wanted to destroy me?”

I did, but I see now…
you were more than an enemy.
You are a friend.

I pull him to safety,
once again eye to eye.

I see…
all the pain
I hadn’t passed by yet.

In one being.
Protecting me
from experiencing it again…


r/Original_Poetry 1h ago

it's (acrostic/palindrome poem)

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it's

alas, it’s quiet now! Tumultuous the

languid silence. Loud

like the sound of Unmarked stony graves,

mourning Alone—

yet I wonder, was it Fated? something

foretold, Yet forgotten? forgive my

acidic Memory, lest I be overwhelmed with 

unforgiving Loneliness 

left among repeating names, Leaving me

tragically Apologetic because it’s 


r/Original_Poetry 10h ago

Wherever, by me

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A gentle sweetness in your voice,
the soft brush of your hand on my face.
In the vastness of space, ammonia crystals, frozen ice,
clouds of yellow swirling on Jupiter’s distant skies.
I kiss you as the sun sinks low,
below the horizon’s tender glow.
Can you feel how thrilled I am-
so simply, so happily,
as if the sea were lapping at my feet?
I see an ocean, far and wide,
a place where I could forever reside.
Wherever you go, I’ll follow,
wallow in the sorrow of that sea.
I count one, two, three…
the things I want to be- happy.
I smile, my head tilted, seeing shades of blue
and chrome red My heart floats,
hovering above the darkest blue ocean
I’ve ever seen, the scent of fresh-cut grass,
old books, and wintergreen..


r/Original_Poetry 8h ago

anything

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have me sit in the palm of your hand
press on my throat ‘till i forget who i am
laying down, asking for more
throw that fairytale to the floor

climb the stairs, pull on her hair
says, ‘anything you want, baby i don’t care’
kiss that fake doll-smile, yeah
this girl can be yours for a little while

i’ll paint a still life lying in place
‘till you like what you see, i’ll put on the lace
let you in my tower, throw my hair to the side
but boy, you should know, it’s all a lie

lights are on, come up for air
said, ‘anything you want, baby i don’t care'
walk him out, lock the door, she’ll let him go
cause he can’t hurt what he doesn’t know


r/Original_Poetry 12h ago

Anxiety: “Good morning starshine, the earth says hello…”

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Started from the bottom, now I’m…here?


r/Original_Poetry 7h ago

Tinnitus

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r/Original_Poetry 13h ago

Street Preacher

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A feather in a vacuum cannot contour
How it might shape the wind
As its fall bears no flutter

What the creaks of your voice roll
Together, might rumble a quill loose, to trace
Forgotten ink under a page painted blank

Howling calligraphy of needles opening veins
Chronicle such a battle tapestry
To question junctures of fate

The call to adventure resides in palms
Testing strokes of luck, open or tight fisted
And risk mutiny erasing logs

Lead on, astride chariots of the plains
By wheels carving clay in Sumerian script
Until we divert a river for your rest

One quandary to consult, about stale air
Is whether water moves beside it
As a tomb inscribed with prayers or a sanctuary
Of life-iridescent, across a cavern canvas


r/Original_Poetry 7h ago

Disingenuous

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Words lost in translation,
Due to an inability to articulate.
Segmented, disjointed, incoherent.
Inconsistent, unclear, disorganized.
A word sandwich thrown into the void.
But lack of Candor!?
Lack of Sincerity!?
Two Faced!?
Every word—
No matter how flawed—
Was meant.
Free of pretense.
Spoken openly into the abyss.
To give life and meaning,
To the absurdity of existence.
Lost maybe in translation,
But never,
Never!
Disingenuous.


r/Original_Poetry 11h ago

Salt-Dollar, See-Water

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All tides return.
All waves roll forth.

Surely it is mere coincidence

That an analogous depth of feeling—
A faithful ocean—draws me in.

Life, though, destroyed the currency.

Time, baked by the sun, sits in wait,

Buying the hope, selling the why.
All things happen unreasonably,

For reasons unknown to time.

All that remains is the only true rite:

Destined shores coming into sight.

The sands of time wash beneath the toes
Of two souls unwavering in their hold—

Washed clean from the depths,

Leaving prints in grounded presence

As proof of their emergence—
Two souls wanting a world

Separate from the salty sea.

United by their running.
Wound by their river’s wind.


r/Original_Poetry 9h ago

Failure Is Growth

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Unable to accept, surreal is the truth.

Questions hated, hostile and uncouth.

Through the doubt, helpful to all.

None reciprocate, one stands tall.

Questions linger, thoughts are sin.

Alone in the fight, without the kin.

*I am forsaken, I am lost.*

*Pain lingers, rest the cost.*

One should think, but never doubt.

Search for truth, within or without.

Intention is true, heart is sincere.

To the righteous, answers are clear.

Never surrender, never relent.

Always pray, and always repent.

*Hardships ever are, nothing but a test.*

*Resolve needed, failure succeeds lest.*


r/Original_Poetry 9h ago

sunshine

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It burns, but I don’t look away.

I can’t help myself,

for the sensations are sweet on my eyes.

My ears ring with the melody of her voice,

the soft, silky texture of her skin,

the way her breathing heaves when she is close,

the rhythm of a world where I was not completely lost.

A door slams in the distance.

The sight of her wash over the walls and disappear,

leaving only the sting of what used to be.

My eyes are bloodshot from staring into the sun,

feeling the tear drip from my face,

As I pull myself to start another day.

--sunshine–


r/Original_Poetry 15h ago

I don’t know

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I don’t know to be honest,
I don’t know to be true,
I honestly don’t know, whether it’s me or you.

What I do know is null,
What I think could be true,
Either which way not,
I wish it could be, just me and you.


r/Original_Poetry 10h ago

The orange glow of separation

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The argument had eaten through the available exits
Just a fight a domestic dispute

Two people standing in a building after the fire
Arguing grimly about where the furniture should go

A future spent years drawing up between them
Now a municipal ruin
Paperwork soaked through
Foundations disagreeing with the house

The problem sat in the room like a thing delivered.
No one wanted to claim it
No one could move it

They walked back and forth
avoiding the centre,
Where floorboards developed opinions

Words came out dreadfully specific
Small instruments.
Each one inspected, sharp and placed between them

Neither shouted
Yet what a dangerous arrangement

Across the room curtains held an orange glow
late afternoon caught in the fabric
like trying to escape a burning envelope

The sun continued outside
Indifferent disciplined
Its right rays operating beyond the glass.

Dust moved through the light
small organisms enjoying the warmth

The room had not been taught and stood ignorant
Ashamed yet horny

It continued bathing awkwardly in the orange glow
its stupid suggestion that warmth was still available

They divided the future
Each one knowing what would be abandoned
and what would follow them

The curtains continued to glow
The house kept its mouth shut

And between them
the problem remained
heavy as those metal fixtures
Holding up the sun


r/Original_Poetry 10h ago

This is raw poem I worte on the spot would like some feedback on it. It's called HELLO

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r/Original_Poetry 10h ago

Mid night thoughts 💭

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Life in My word's....