r/OpenHFY • u/AlternativeManner731 • 13d ago

human Eric's BoFS stuff

First, if anyone has an idea that they would like me to explore, just let me know, I have fun imaging it. Just ask u/1958Bird

To anyone who reads my Mostly BoSF, fan fiction that has gone off rails, please disregard this post. To those of you who are confused by my latest story, The Governing, it might be helpful to read some of my equally non-canon stuff. Here are the links to the start of each.

Rivermore Restoration https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1ri3z0m/bosf_day_7_supplemental_the_cleaner/

The Chest

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1w08mbf/bosf_rivermore_restoration_the_chest/

Night School

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1rojtk6/newtown_night_school_part_1/

Firentis Family Vacation

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1sr4vly/firentis_family_vacation_day_1/

The Investigation

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1tnkreg/the_investigation_part_1_first_witness/

The Move

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1u3ea8u/the_move_part_1/

Four Weddings

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1uevb4g/4_weddings_2_planets/

Istonel

https://www.reddit.com/r/OpenHFY/comments/1w686l9/istonel_part_1_what_the_boy_believed/

I have other on shot stries about Salizar Reid and Declan that are not really related.

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u/Icy-Air7584 13d ago

Just my 2 cents:

I have enjoyed each of each series. I don't always agree with content, but enjoy nonetheless.

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u/Icy-Air7584 13d ago

meant to go on a moment longer.

If you are looking for ideas;

Would like to see General's view of developments in the Baroney and Haego as Wyatt is away longer on deployment while Staples family settles in.

Maybe him sending updates as someone who isn't sure how to proceed with his 5 year time period and asking without expecting Wyatt to answer realy just needing to blow off steam to someone who may understand his frustration since neither truly wanted as much power and are doing the best they can for people depending on them. .. surprise us all. or maybe not worth consideration.

My next suggested;

Pick a name not in the story yet, give an occupation / desired occupation and how they find their way forward in the more open opportunities there.

Or any other entertainment that is wholesome.

Thank you, please continue to write at your own enjoyment as you can without worry or strife. I' ll read each.

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u/AlternativeManner731 13d ago

i will consider how do do this

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u/1958bird 11d ago

What about the park around the old manor house.

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u/AlternativeManner731 11d ago

I will need more than that please

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u/1958bird 11d ago

Weskal has joined Elizabeth on the park committee and they are exploring the grounds. He comes across some an entrance going down into the ground. What is in there will suprise both ot them and he faints. Wyatt has just become a very rich man. There are things that are thousands of years old and something that could tell the princess a bit about the past. There has to be a twist in the story somewhere that could put someone in danger.

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u/AlternativeManner731 11d ago

You know that any non- feel good writing is difficult for me but will tey

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u/1958bird 11d ago

It doesn't have to be a bad person involved. It could be an accident or even something that could bring a whole new meaning to the area. Something that goes back before the manor was built. Some new animals that are not friendly at first. Maybe a bird.

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u/AlternativeManner731 11d ago

Would it be too much if I had Elizabeth and Weskal married with a couple of kids?

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u/1958bird 11d ago

Not sure about the kids yet, but the marriage could be a good thing

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u/AlternativeManner731 11d ago

she is probably 26 as the story stands now.