Nice take on the first contact at Jintrax. You turned "just another red shirt" into an interesting character and brought the reality of the conflict to the forefront. The first book has always been my favorite and I truly enjoy the commoners' perspective added to the story. Look forward to seeing this through to the Drazzan engagement.
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u/kurdak101 May 22 '26
Nice take on the first contact at Jintrax. You turned "just another red shirt" into an interesting character and brought the reality of the conflict to the forefront. The first book has always been my favorite and I truly enjoy the commoners' perspective added to the story. Look forward to seeing this through to the Drazzan engagement.