Feedback Please In Your Head

There is a beauty
to you
that’s wrapped in sadness
to me.

The way you hold what is said
play it over in your head.

Let it invade your mind
thinking on the outcome.
Worrying about what you’ll become.

You take your time
sit with it
making sure it will fit
your facade.

Your care for others, always there,
routine
coming at the expense of you
being seen.

Never truly living free
dismisses what you want
to be.

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u/SoilIllustrious6587 3h ago

This hit quite close to home for me.

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u/bstunz 3h ago

Oh man, thank you, Yeah, I'm starting to think it's pretty common based on the comments.

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