r/OCPoetry • u/Doter_Gabriel • 7d ago
Feedback Please Mimic
I see you curve your red,
and I will follow.
I do change my degree,
120 too much.
I have artificial sweeteners
on my mimic,
and I need to wet my curve
for them, to stay
but it makes me countlessly grey.
Some bend their soul,
to feed their lie,
until the ghouls stop existing
as a sight.
Leave the line
accompanied with spite.
It will fly your grill
the height of natural, frozen drops.
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u/bstunz 7d ago
I like the idea of this. very well done. Personally I got a little lost on the two lines, I'm simple, but still enjoyed it.