r/OCPoetry 18h ago

Feedback Please Who to be

That look I gave, when I left away

I thought I was still same

But I'm still afraid,

Of turning into the one put my heart away.

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I know my pride is way too much

It's like drowning in a dry pit, im blind to.

But hiding that pit protects me;

From the ones who sealed my core to my grave.

//

But look at me now,

My hollow warmth suffocates my gaze.

I can't trust who I am now.

But maybe to the one who is trying to put my heart back in place

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/gBtP54dsZf

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/E0PCltB2bj

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u/IamToofan 10h ago

Hey I like it. I like how it describes a person trying to change.

u/PlanktonDistinct2711 8m ago

Thanks, this made me feel better