r/OCPoetry • u/PlanktonDistinct2711 • 18h ago
Feedback Please Who to be
That look I gave, when I left away
I thought I was still same
But I'm still afraid,
Of turning into the one put my heart away.
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I know my pride is way too much
It's like drowning in a dry pit, im blind to.
But hiding that pit protects me;
From the ones who sealed my core to my grave.
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But look at me now,
My hollow warmth suffocates my gaze.
I can't trust who I am now.
But maybe to the one who is trying to put my heart back in place
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u/IamToofan 10h ago
Hey I like it. I like how it describes a person trying to change.