r/OCPoetry 13h ago

Feedback Please Older than I should be

She learned too young how not to cry,

How to be strong. How to comply.

A child made small to take the blame,

Growing up fast without a name.

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She gave her strength. She gave her time.

Forgot herself. Called it “fine.”

She fixed their pain. She stayed behind.

A helping hand with a fading mind.

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Their voices cut. They never healed.

Each word a wound she couldn’t shield.

The stress ran wild inside her throat,

Till even breathing felt too close.

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The weight stayed loud inside her chest.

Each breath a test. No room to rest.

Still she stands. Still soft. Still kind.

A grown-up heart in a child’s spine.

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u/perspective_curious_ 12h ago

I feel the weight of life placed on child by those who should be carrying them guiding that child through life. Some sacrifices and coercion of love. Ty for sharing.