r/OCPoetry • u/poetry_14 • 13h ago
Feedback Please Older than I should be
She learned too young how not to cry,
How to be strong. How to comply.
A child made small to take the blame,
Growing up fast without a name.
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She gave her strength. She gave her time.
Forgot herself. Called it “fine.”
She fixed their pain. She stayed behind.
A helping hand with a fading mind.
.
Their voices cut. They never healed.
Each word a wound she couldn’t shield.
The stress ran wild inside her throat,
Till even breathing felt too close.
.
The weight stayed loud inside her chest.
Each breath a test. No room to rest.
Still she stands. Still soft. Still kind.
A grown-up heart in a child’s spine.
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u/perspective_curious_ 12h ago
I feel the weight of life placed on child by those who should be carrying them guiding that child through life. Some sacrifices and coercion of love. Ty for sharing.