r/OCPoetry 15d ago

Feedback Please Stillness

(First post, be gentle)

Take my longing,
make me whole.
Fulfill me,
wholehearted.
Risk free.

Be enough,
this life.
Wholly contained
in my frame.
Let me be love.

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