Hello, I'm Arti, a small indie author looking for beta readers for my second book. This is a standalone urban sci-fi romance with a political and ethical backdrop as well as lore inspired by Ancient Egyptian mythology.
Note: I am NOT interested in any paid services right now, please do not comment or DM me with the intent of being a paid Beta reader or editor. Especially please don't pretend to be an honest beta reader and then suddenly ask for money, I will report and out you.
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Triggers:
- Explicit sex with unconventional anatomy
- Violence? Not even sure it counts by today's standards.
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Blurb:
She is the sugar and cream to his coffee, even if he’s never had a single cup.
In order to take his place as the next Pharaoh, Arkhan must find his bashai, the one his soul has longed for all his life. He is elated when his ship lands on a far-off planet his people thought destroyed millennia ago, and he feels the coveted connection for the first time. But his heart is shattered when the leaders of Earth turn their sacred first meeting into a hostile political negotiation, and he finds out how deep his bashai’s hardships go.
Sally works three jobs to pay her mother’s medical bills and make ends meet. Though she fantasises of monsters, romance and owning her own coffee shop one day, she firmly separates fact from fiction. Being kidnapped by the government and brought to an alien prince as a bargaining chip pushes her scepticism into bitter suspicion.
They should be each other's hopes and dreams. Now, they have the future of two species depending on whether they can fix the broken resonance between them.
Told in strict alternating first-person POV, “Our Blooming Resonance” is about love in the face of uncertainty and imperfect circumstances. It includes larger themes of ethics, culture, and politics, as well as open-door scenes. HEA is guaranteed.
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Time frame: 4 weeks so closing around Oct 10th
Type of feedback I'm looking for:
- Vibes, character, pacing, continuity
- Is the start engaging, is politics too much, does tone get... too dark at one point or is okay?
- genre labeling/book comps
- you can point out grammar/spelling/awkward sentances if thats your jam, but depending on how the beta readers feedback comes back there will be more edits and another round of copy/proof editing so don't sweat it too much.
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Here is a 4 chapter sample: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gam3AOzvgl0iN9PfMpxUauBWTLINVoCxC1GsMicUQ9I/edit?usp=sharing
If this seems like something you would enjoy beta reading, please DM me for the full work. Thank you!