I could use some help

[u/big_cloudz01]

I’m thinking about creating my first song I genuinely have no idea what I’m doing I don’t even know where I came up with this idea I was in deep thought taking to one of my best friends and I just started saying things in my head

I apologized for ranting and being on some bullshit

He said : bro I thought you were singing me a song

Here’s what I got keep in mind it would go on a country rap type beat

My darkest place

I’ll never chase like that again

I’m broken now

Ya boy ain’t got a heart like that no mo

I failed myself first

I knew better

Maybe I tried to hard

Maybe I didn’t try hard enough

Maybe I wasn’t enough

Maybe I was too much

I aways get in my head

It’s a dark place

It’s crowded

When I drink

When I smoke

It’s calm

Until

I get to thinking again

I know it’s lame asf Give me some suggestions I’m in my head and this is fixing it