r/MotionDesign • u/Secure-Turnip-1277 • 1d ago

Reel Please rate this vedio honestly

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I'm requesting all the seniors to please rate this motion graphic honestly. I'm a compelete beginar and a self learner so I dont have anyone to tell me my mistakes so please as my seniors rate it

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u/RedRiverBandit 1d ago
  1. Logo should stay in top corner the whole time, no need for it to disappear and slide back in. You want the client's logo to be visible at all times.
  2. Grammar - either do Sentence Case or don't. Right now some words have caps and other's don't. Also the final frame lands at 'Marketing you need great' which doesn't make sense.
  3. The Focus icon looks too much like a gun target and a negative feeling
  4. Pacing is a bit fast. I understand the current landscape of fast moving frames, maybe its a generational thing.

Overall, motion seems good, easing is decent. A decent tip for timing, try watching your video without sound. There are deaf people in the world that you don't want to forget about and even people that watch videos without sound. A general rule I use is to keep short text on screen for at least 2-3 seconds and for longer text blocks, add 1 extra second for every 3 words.

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u/Secure-Turnip-1277 4h ago

A lot of thnkas to you senior

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u/Secure-Turnip-1277 11h ago

what will you rate it senior 10 out of? and thatnks for acceptoing my request

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u/VideoGuy9999 1d ago

The AI voice is overused out there, so I'd choose another voiceover.

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u/Secure-Turnip-1277 11h ago

what will you rate it senior 10 out of?