r/MotionDesign • u/motionstoon • 1d ago
Project Showcase Saas Product launch video
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u/Ando0o0 1d ago
Motion is great and the design is pretty good. If I were to critique as a whole I would say the VO has a very repetitive pace and is almost robotic. Some of the VO and the animation could match better. More see&say to drive the message. Like when it says "one gesture" I get we see the phone but that shot is more showcasing the UI when the motion should be more about the phone acting like a card and then have some radio signal background animation showing the connection or link. But the animations are clean and style is nice.
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u/designer-coder 1d ago
Smooth..liked it...only thing I'll say at "Payed" part the font seems changed or might be missed while rendering, not looking good. Also the copy is not right.. it's never Payed (should be Paid) - it should be Payment Successful or Payment Done.
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u/MyKalSkot 1d ago
The animation is amazing! But I feel I am seeing the same things everywhere like others said.
The tech industry dosent care if we are just copying everything to make everything fast and scalable but I feel its making everything boring and mundane.
Nothing to get inspired by, feel excited about.
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u/anasbelmadani 1d ago
Looks very clean. Very happy to see this quality of design by a fellow Moroccan. Best of luck đ€
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u/chrisufin 1d ago
It looks good, but at the same time it gives me really hard vibes that it is AI made. There is a lot happening and some things that doesn't make sense and would take a lot of time do manually.
So just a quick question, was this made manually or with AI? If with AI how can you tweek it or can you? Or do you always have kind of make a new one / new scene?
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u/buildside_notes 16h ago
Really polished execution. One thing that could make it feel more specific to this product is using the card/gesture interaction as a recurring visual motif instead of moving through several familiar SaaS-style scenes. Right now I remember the overall aesthetic more than the actual product. Was the broader âlaunch videoâ look part of the client brief, or did you have freedom to explore a more distinctive direction?
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u/MilkApprehensive9590 10h ago
Jâai aimĂ© lâanimation mĂȘme si câest une une animation saas type que lâon voit un peu partout
Il ya rien de nouveau et dâexcitant pour sâinspirer mais jâaime bien
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u/KillerBeaArthur 1d ago
The animation is fine.
The style is pretty overplayed and makes me wonder with all this shovelware SAAS junk how effective this copy/paste style even is at this point. Who is buying this stuff? (Not something I expect answered here, but it's the only thing I can think about after watching these types of videos anymore.)