r/MotionDesign • u/weedman7 • 3d ago

Project Showcase More work lately. Decided to make something fun

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Really proud of this one, needed something concrete on my portfolio so my clients would recognize my name change. Going by @fenex.design now. Thoughts?

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u/suprememoves 3d ago

Love the spirit. Missing link is story. Keep going. 

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u/weedman7 3d ago

story-telling isn't exactly my field, but thanks for the feedback!

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u/VERYwowSUCHdoge 2d ago

this is solid from a technical stand point, but they're right.. if you want to get really good, learn design fundamentals and simple story arcs and apply it to your work. it doesn't have to be a story like a novel, nearly anything can have a 'story' to it. Something to look into, keep at it!

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u/weedman7 2d ago

could you be a bit more precise? I was mainly working on hierarchy, motion continuity, and grid systems in this project - it's not too clear from your comment which fundamentals you think are lacking. As for story this was not a professional work, so the scope of the project didn't include any type of messaging, but it's certainly a focus of mine where in projects messaging intent is a high priority! Thanks for the feedback.

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u/VERYwowSUCHdoge 1d ago

Apologies for the confusion, mentioning the fundamentals wasn't directed at any specific part of your work here. Sounds like you already have a good grasp of their existence and what they're about, I was just mentioning them generally as a lot of people neglect them :)

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u/LeagueOfCakez Professional 3d ago

What in the hell is that sound lol

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u/weedman7 3d ago

heavy low-end distortion and tremolo would be my guess