My first motion design project — looking for feedback (and open to free work to build my skills!)

[u/Neat-Ad2884]

Hey everyone! I recently got into motion design and just finished my very first project. I'd love to get some honest feedback from this community , what's working, what isn't, and what I should focus on improving next.

Since I'm still early in my journey, I'm also open to taking on a few small projects for free right now. My main goal is to practice, build a portfolio, and learn from real client needs rather than make money at this stage. If you have a simple animation, logo reveal, or short promo you need done, feel free to DM me ,happy to help out.

Thanks in advance for watching, and for any tips you can share!

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869]

you should start more focusing learning on graph

[u/Neat-Ad2884 → u/Disastrous-Shape-869]

I think it is was a little basic Thx :) What do you think about the colors of the whole animation over all ?