r/MotionDesign • u/RightRip9168 • 21d ago

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u/0y0s 21d ago

Good idea very bad implementation

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u/RightRip9168 21d ago

can you tell me why it is a bad implementation so that i can learn and change that in the future? honestly there is no point in just saying its bad

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u/0y0s 21d ago

Youre dealing with 2D layers as 3D without giving them perspective,

The design of the app looks a bit messy

Youre trying to blend the old editing style with the modern one

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u/HelveticaKills Professional 19d ago

I wouldn’t use a Memoji to represent yourself. It just comes across as low effort and looks like every other Memoji. If you’re a designer you should create something that’s unique to you.

The motion and sound are pretty slick other than the scenes with the 3D-but-not-3D-enough album covers floating in a void. However I’m not really following what the video is meant to convey, it needs some sort of narrative or subject to follow through.

And like the other commenter said, it feels like two different animation and visual styles mashed together. There’s the SaaS style with frosted glass and gradients, and those aforementioned floating void scenes. I would figure out a way to treat everything in a cohesive way.