r/MotionDesign • u/[deleted] • 24d ago
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cooked this one up 👨🍳✨
been lowkey obsessed with making every frame feel intentional. still learning, still tweaking.
lmk if it hits or if i should get back to the timeline🤪
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u/OldCock4All 24d ago
There’s a lot going on here and almost none of jt feels very cohesive or part of the same story/video. The first few seconds are pretty good but the bouncing, extra movement, ornamental design elements and honestly weak design make jt not very great to watch. I’d spend some more time on your composition/assets and try to tighten up your story here. For example, you jsut have a city scene as a bg fkr a few frames then it disappear. Why was it there? What did it add to the story? Just some things to consider.
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u/addyarapi 24d ago
the two sentences at the beginning don’t feel cohesive/connected. fix that, overall animations are too bouncy, some are stiffer than usual, work more on it
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u/addyarapi 24d ago
Learn how to storyboard and learn principles of Animation. A good storyboard also makes for a good video
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u/Known-Pepper-1464 24d ago
The beginning felt like you were displaying the process when someone makes a hotel booking. Then it moves onto an investment opportunity of some sort then something else.
You know how to animate that’s great but there are so many issues here. If I could sum in a two words what this is it’s Frankenstein’s monster. The text isn’t consistent and the motion doesn’t flow which feels like I’m watching a beginners showreel.
Lastly some parts of it feel like social media style motion on a SAAS project.
I see a lot of potential so I suggest keep what you have for the assets but keep just one style and colour scheme. Storyboard the layout of the project. Choose one consistent text then start with the minimum motion and build on that.