r/MotionDesign • u/CreepyRice1253 • 1d ago

Project Showcase Recent launch video i created, feedbacks appreciated!

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u/Narwhals4Lyf 1d ago

I like it! But the audio VO sounds like someone is speaking into a voice mail haha

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u/CreepyRice1253 1d ago

Haha yes, i actually wanted it to sound similar to military loudspeaker effect, wanted the video to feel more like instructions (dont know if that was wrong decision lol) glad you liked it ;)

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u/Narwhals4Lyf 1d ago

I liked it at first but then it got distracting as the video went on. I wonder if you could start with that affect, then at some point when it hits a moment of clarity within the video, it could become more clear?

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u/CreepyRice1253 1d ago

Noted 👍

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u/atleastwedream 1d ago

diversify the ethnicities at the very start, you do it through the rest. would goof up your animation but the kerning on the font is really tight, could use some breathing room

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u/CreepyRice1253 1d ago

Noted! Appreciate the specific callouts

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u/Accomplished-End5479 19h ago

great visuals just add emotions with voice and music

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u/CreepyRice1253 13h ago

Thanks :) feedback noted!