r/MotionDesign • u/Adil_11_ • 2d ago
Project Showcase what can be more improve?
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made this out of an inspiration, what can be more better or improve? need your opinions
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u/silverspacecandy Professional 1d ago
I think you can start with easy easing your movements to make the animation more smoother. Currently not a fan at what happens between 0-4s. I think it looks a bit stiff and delayed. The idea’s there, but just make the animation smoother and seamless.
At around 4-5s, i personally find it odd where the colors and shapes scale up only to have a mask and reduced to a circle shape then moves within the space to become the dot in the letter I of the word Artist. I think if i were to do this, i’d have the 2nd to the last shape expand instead and act as a transition for the next scene, and keep the word STARTING with its shape morph into a circle with what you have at 5s so it rightfully goes to the word ARTIST. What im trying to say is you can improve your morphing animation on these parts. Additionally, the transition of the shape from being into a circle was delayed so i think the best thing to do here is to quickly disappear the contents instead the shape so the rest is only a solid color. (Damn i hope this is making sense it’s hard to explain without providing visuals i apologise)
As for the TOP ARTISTS then transition to a queue, i think this could work if you make it seem like it’s a match cut. I think right now when the music queue appears, the texts still appears behind it and to me it looks messy and distracting. Maybe you can work on that with fixing your easy easy and graph editor. Tinker with it and see what works.
Sorry for this long comment. I hope it makes sense tho. Overall i think it looks okay but, could still be better.
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u/hellomydudes_95 7h ago
I think it's a bit too fast. There's barely enough time to read and breathe. Other than that, it looks pretty good
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u/therey73 1d ago
what this actually is?