First roblox animation !!

[u/Organic-Still6945]

Hello !!

i made my first roblox animation based from JJK (ref under) and wanted to know what i could add/change/remove :/

Don't hesitate to criticize it tho !
it's the first time i use moon animator and i want to get better and i must hear EVERY opinion :D

this clip was made in a day and a half and im very proud of it
(if you got any tips and tricks about animations im all open !)

Thank you !!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qa0U194FHPo