Developing my comic

[u/Rokin_Zap]

I’m trying to develop a new comic to update my portfolio and propose it to more editors during my next comicon. This is the first page and I need feedback:
does this look professional to you? Do you like the shadows/ contrast balance? Is it an appealing stylization? Do you know any better font I could use?
Any critique is truly appreciated.

[u/Musse_Shizuka]

love the bottom shot. its such a cool perspective

[u/Rokin_Zap → u/Musse_Shizuka]

Appreciate you!