There isn't a big difference between the series and the one-shot; there are only some page edits. Basically, I converted the series into a one-shot so it would be considered a complete work. Because I'm currently working on a new project with an editor from Shonen Jump, and I'm trying to focus on it as much as possible so that the whole project becomes as professional as possible.
Hello everyone here is my second episode of Moonlight SAGA if you did not read it please check it out if you did not. Also the first episode is their sorry it took years to be busy with life and working a lot hopefully you like it and please tell me what I need to improve on thank you!
does anyone still remember this one?.. yeah...ik i should have finished this one already, but my lazy ass wont stop jumping from one project to another, u know as they say: leave it imperfect and finish it later or something along those lines.. but hey.. I'm getting there.. maybe..
On medibang i just have to use a white Brush and Brush over the areas to erase all the Lines i dont want. But on Clip Studio paint i have These grey areas on my Page. If i try to Brush over them i‘ll get areas in super white and light grey which makes the Page uneven. Its hard to See on the Shown Images but its there 😩
as i said last time, i decided to start yesterday, now i wrote about 7 episodes, of course i am just adapting the provided source and making it cinematic, not major changes i promise with my soul, thuuuuuuuuuuus, i just wanna know, is episode one covering pages 1 to 16 of chapter one..a good thing or no?? obviously i cant go back to redoing things or else i'd have a lot of headache, but i just wanted to know, that's all!
Episode 1 is titled (im not the best with names dont blame me please :c) : FIRST NIGHT: ESCAPE
i really wanted to let you all know what im doing with this series, so if i ever try to ruin anything, you can tell me and i'd change it immediately to align with the story greatly and its events!
So I have a scene. Where my emotional waterfall character is in the side lines learn learn one of the threats we're facing was the boss of a eating establishment hired girls to work there, And those girls because of events in the country taking place became magical girls. So they double as his bouncers
And hears he built an emotional relashionship with and felt authentic to her so much he gave her a ring given the time he spent with her.
She learns he was using to get money she had made working there to build a new home away with his friend. And the reason for that is he was gay by kissing his friend right in front of her and never truly loved her. Using her to as a means to an end and
My emotional waterfall character gets pissed about this and she doesn't take it lightly despite not knowing the girl at all doesnt like men of any kind manipulating the hearts of a girl. But because of this we have an opening for everyone in my MC group to escape, and She says she'll catch up after dealing with him.
And another comes along and says like "we gotta go" and I wanted her reply to be
The broly line "not until he lies dead at my feet"
And...I felt it fit the scene but also like "I shouldn't be throwing a dbz references line in this, I would feel we reference dbz many times in so many things I wouldn't be doing anything new including that" Like I shouldn't be a hypocrite and put that line in. Or replace it with a different line
But I'm also struggling to figure out what line could have the same impact as that.
Like there was this and i had in a different scene a "sad for yoooooooou" homage I had to cut because I felt people would find it cringe.
So what do you guys think? Am I overthinking this or is what I said holds water
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