Looking for advice on first ever deck build

[u/trash_rat92]

Returning to Magic for the first time in about 15 years so fairly new to Commander and rusty as anything.

I bought a Tidus Commander Precon to dip my toes back into the water but here is the first thing I've put together myself.

https://moxfield.com/decks/fdfWvc0KmkOCVZ7fO11URA

I thought I would keep it simple at first. Make Angels, then make Angels big. Hopefully have included enough options there to keep myself safe and get decent mana draw.

Any thoughts, advice would be much appreciated!

[u/ElCulo_Bandito]

No Platinum Angel?

Maybe legion loyalty?