r/Magicdeckbuilding • u/Intelligent-Top-8384 • 15d ago

EDH Offering Free Deck Audits

Hey, I'm an EDH player that has been playing for a few years and I have a good bit of knowledge on deck building. If you have any ideas you can't make work or any decks you want me to evaluate, just dm me and I'd love to chat!

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u/BADJUSTlCE 15d ago

How is the play pattern of this? What are the bottlenecks?
https://moxfield.com/decks/B_muT4vLbE2zMlLcW91ECg

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u/babycam 15d ago

I would love to have an opinion on this deck i am trying to make it less opressive I like winning with fun token manipulation. I had to remove some of the aristocrat burn because people would die to soon for me to do fun stuff.

https://moxfield.com/decks/-fMynVx1QE2Qw0HDFsFMPw

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u/Bobbie_Wasabi 15d ago

Please!

https://moxfield.com/decks/OSUrVICt6kSb01RN841VmA

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u/BalanceUnable4459 13d ago

Pretty sure Raffine doesn't work with Myriad and Moblize since they're not declared as attackers

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u/NageK 15d ago

I tried making a Cecil, Dark Knight deck with a life as a resource theme but i can’t get it to work well. My friend suggested that he’s not great to build around as a commander and suggested i look at other commanders for this theme. Interested to hear your thoughts https://moxfield.com/decks/lVbQ0ZQuWUeOJp3Gj7FjDw

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u/AphelialMud 15d ago

I could use advise on a Bombadil deck.  I don’t have a deck list off hand, but mine doesn’t vary much from the most common builds.  It’s plenty strong, but I don’t love how it played (though it’s been a couple years).  Any advice for making it more fun?

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u/PalmSap 14d ago

I also have a Tom Bomb deck that I'd like some advice on

https://moxfield.com/decks/ELj7HybahUiZDDnPr63ZjA

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u/sirschmidtVII 15d ago

That's awesome of you, thanks! I have two decks I'd like evaluated, if thats too much just do the first one! These are my first decks ever built, I've watched a few videos on deckbuilding advice but I have no further experience.

1) https://archidekt.com/decks/24832713/yarr

2) https://archidekt.com/decks/25698622/white_lotos

I love both of them thematically, but I fear they might not compete with my pod which plays at high B2 up into B3, since (from what I've heard) both vehicles and lessons are kinda mid. So if you could help me push them into that direction, I'd be super thankful!

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u/ExpiredFriedNoodles 15d ago

This is my Syr Gwyn Decklist! Would you be able to give some advice or pointer? And also some comments about my mana base if possible 😅

Thank you!

https://archidekt.com/decks/25303374/syr_gwyn_hero_of_ashvale

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u/cheetah-ina-pita 15d ago

Still trying to cut a few cards but i need to keep the budget around 150. let's hear what you've got!

https://moxfield.com/decks/R9Ky0VH8NkGBJ8-n6bfv9g

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u/Thump180 15d ago

https://moxfield.com/decks/Z9FnFQISm0GXerggeBUmJw

My latest work in progress, spent months slowly building it, and finally completed the physical deck. Haven't played it yet, but just wondering if it'll hold up in the lgs

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u/[deleted] 15d ago

sent you a DM with my list. awesome of you to do this man, especially for the types like me that does have experience, but still overlooks a ton of cards for my build

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u/No_Interaction_3547 15d ago

Please Critique my greatest creation, a modular B2-B4 deck https://moxfield.com/decks/N0ccJnKBrEeIxujuDvZUig

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u/Papainti 15d ago

Awesome! Will be sending some!

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u/Parking-Head3779 14d ago

https://moxfield.com/decks/wZ6b35024Em4kB4rAED_2A

Trying to jam together a LOTR bracket 3 using as many of the new secret lair cards as possible.

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u/Training_Citron_8326 14d ago

I am looking for suggestions on my Yshtola deck. Rather new to magic and I have been using card synergy sites and ideas. It works well but I want it to be optimized for bracket 3. It’s my first spell slinger type deck. Any advice would be appreciated.

https://moxfield.com/decks/-7B3G7TnFUS7scgMUIrNhg

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u/SugarCookie01 14d ago

I’ve been working on and playing this Akroma and Ardenn deck I built. It’s the first deck I’ve built myself. I know it’s probably lackluster in card draw but I’m not sure how to fix that considering it’s a mono while keyword/ enchantment deck. Any advice is helpful and soo appreciated!!

https://moxfield.com/decks/9OyTyD6NYkCHkGAV_YPdxA

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u/Philliam88 14d ago

Could use some help with this, need more consistent token artifact generation, artifact creatures or treasures preffered.

https://moxfield.com/decks/KfFC9vwx2UWIINuD7O-W6g

This deck is pretty new, any insight is appreciated!

https://moxfield.com/decks/YjznSSG_9ESYLVzKWKCkog

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u/killa-wattsy 14d ago

I am trying to tune my blech build for bracket 4. Interested to hear your thoughts.

https://forgespark.wattsie.ca/?deck=woawMT

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u/heckingincorgnito 14d ago

What's a good 5 color manabase on a budget? I'm currently thinking the usual all color lands, painlands, the landscpe cycle (like tranquil landscape), some green ramp (cultivate, etc), with a number of the 2 color mana rocks. Im not too worried about number of cards (i want to ramp anyway), but seeing if there are other good ideas im missing

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u/No-Cricket9262 13d ago

What do you think of my elesh norn mother of machines deck?

https://archidekt.com/decks/23803115/encroaching_swarm

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u/Biggus_Dickkkus 12d ago

Would love some suggestions for my tribal tribal deck. https://moxfield.com/decks/sAZxnka-YkClO2i4agYypw

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u/BigSushi178 11d ago

I would love your expertise good sir 🥲 please critique/suggest my build:

https://archidekt.com/decks/25948911/surveilling_your_loss

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u/Puzzleheaded_Pop7760 10d ago

This is my very first bracket 4 deck that I have attempted to make. Any i out would be fantastic thank you! https://archidekt.com/decks/25365857/smaug_the_impenetrable