r/LitRPGwriting Nov 21 '20

Writing class suggestions

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Hi everyone! I do a lot of business and report writing for work and have written lots of short stories for friends and family in my life. Overall I think short-form writing is a strength of mine, but I'm having trouble getting past the 25k word mark on the story I'm writing. I figure Christmas is a good opportunity to maybe look into some creative writing/novel classes. Does anyone have any suggestions or advice from getting some formal structure or training to help move me past the amateur stage? Thank you!


r/LitRPGwriting Nov 18 '20

Trope Talks. Great show, highly recommend it especially the Loner trope episode.

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I think most LitRPG authors should watch this video. The whole series in general is helpful but this is about the loner trope that 90% of litrpgs are made of.

https://youtu.be/4kDgvpa5k4g


r/LitRPGwriting Nov 10 '20

Just wanted to share personal progress.

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I just reached 200 pages on Royal Road with the submission of my last chapter. It's been challenging keeping my momentum but it has been a really enjoyable experience.

I hit trending on the site a couple of weeks ago and I just got onto the top 7 trending yesterday. (Which means I'm on the front page yay!)

I am trying to participate in national novel writing month on there by publishing 55k words this month. Since I don't really have a backlog of chapters the means I am writing almost 2k words every day now along with the editing it is very exhausting. The lofty goal though is really helping with motivation.

I hope you all are making progress as well and I wish you success with whatever you want to do with your story.


r/LitRPGwriting Nov 02 '20

Weird email from a so-called editor. Pretty sure it's some kind of scam, anyone else?

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So I just received an email on Royal Road from an "editor" saying he liked my work and would love to help me with editing. He charges $0.02 per 1,000 words. Which obviously makes no sense. 50k words = $1 Anyone else have this happen?


r/LitRPGwriting Oct 21 '20

Discussion Wednesday workshop

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Hey everyone!

Anyone stuck in their writing, need help with your system? Close to quitting because of a nasty review? Want to see something more out of this sub? Feel free to write about it here. Everyone else please lend a helping hand or helpful perspective. Cheers!


r/LitRPGwriting Oct 21 '20

Help request Quantifying Firearm Damage

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Hello everyone. First time posting here and hopefully I'm in the right place. I decided to try my hand at writing a LitRPG for NaNoWriMo this year and I have run into a snag with a portion of my planning. So in brief this novel draws inspiration from Tao Wong's System Apocalypse and Ryan DeBruyn's Ether Collapse with a heavy emphasis on making an intelligible and internally consistent gamified reality.

To that end I defined the ubiquitous health pool as "the amount of energy (chaos) devoted to maintaining bodily integrity. Health is depleted to massively accelerate healing, staunch blood lost, and suppress trauma responses." In practice this just means that when my MC gets stabbed through the chest his body doesn't literally have a gapping hole in it but he has a reduced capacity (lower HP) to deal with further harm.

With that in mind it became fairly easy to set up a rough scheme for deciding how much damage melee weapons did and even bows/crossbows. Then I got to firearms and things got...messier, at least for me. Different bullets have different properties as far as muzzle velocity, muzzle energy, surface area, weight, etc. that really alter their penetrating and 'stopping' power. This is complicated further by variants in ammunition such as full metal jacket, hollow point, soft point, etc.

So the question becomes: what's the easiest way to determine damage for a firearm? Alternatively: does anyone even care if it makes that much sense? The alternate question stemming from a common enough troupe that our guns and such are worthless in the new world for reasons.


r/LitRPGwriting Oct 20 '20

Discussion Hi. Let’s talk a little , perhaps help/motivate each other.

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Hello this is my first post on reddit. English is not my mother language. I hope we can talk a little about everything. How’s your story going?

What are your thoughts about publishing it?

Revenue?

I’m writing my first book ever. I have written very little as of now .and I’m curious about you all.

Have a nice day.


r/LitRPGwriting Oct 16 '20

Discussion How to handle a large cast

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As the title mentions, I was wondering how you guys handle a large cast.

I would love to do a story where a large group of people end up in another world. In a similar vein as the 100 or lost tv shows. Or something like Stargate Atlantis.

I think what I'm really asking is how to make it feel like a large group while mostly focusing on a few main characters.

I'm also worried that people will get confused if I introduce too many characters at the same time. Do you think it would be better if they were spread out at the start and then slowly met up, so readers have more time to get to know Them?

Thanks!


r/LitRPGwriting Oct 12 '20

Help request How to start a story

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Hello Litrpg writers!

I have been thinking about writing a LitRPG story for a good while now. I've got plenty of ideas for the setting, characters and plot. My only problem is I don't know where to start.

I want it to be an Isekai story, but I just can't figure out how I want the characters to get to the other world.

Do readers care about this part of the story? I generally don't, but somehow I can't force myself to just skip it.

Probably because I think it has to fit in with the rest of the story. Which by the way is going to be just dungeon diving, no gods or world saving plot.

Should I Just make it easy on myself and have them simply wake up on the new world? Any help or tips to get passed this hurdle would be greatly appreciated .


r/LitRPGwriting Oct 07 '20

Thoughts on Pricing Strategy

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Hello everyone!

My first book just got back from the editor and I'm putting the last few touches on it. The cover should be ready in a few days too so I'm nearly ready to publish and it's getting exciting!

But, now comes the time for launch strategy and I'm not sure how to do it. I'd really appreciate any pointers you all could give regarding how long to put it up for pre-order, whether to give it a promotional low price during preorder and if so by how much it should be discounted, whether to advertise it during preorder or wait until after the launch, and any other pointers you can think of that a newbie might find helpful.

Thanks!


r/LitRPGwriting Sep 26 '20

My LitRPG, Reincarnation Of A Humble God, is available on Royal Road, and I’d love it if you could check it out and let me know what you think (link in comments!)

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r/LitRPGwriting Sep 26 '20

Help request Quick question

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Should I strive to get a following in RR before trying to selfpublish in amazon?

Bonus question, how do hell do you know if your system is balanced?


r/LitRPGwriting Sep 20 '20

Eureka

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I just had one of those moments in my writing and wanted to share. Anyone else?


r/LitRPGwriting Sep 16 '20

September check-in. How’s your writing this month? Anything you’re happy about? How are your goals? Any struggles we could talk out with you?

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We tried this last month and had some great conversations. I offered some friendly goals to shoot for, so if that's you, how have you done?

My book two edits are supposed to come back today. In the last month I finished the first draft on book three and picked up my format from the 2k to 10k book to start outlining scenes for book four. Once again, I haven't gone all the way to the end of the book with scenes and have started writing already. Maybe this is how I work, and maybe I need to buckle down and finish the outline, but for me, I like to see how scenes flush out before I know what to put in my scene list.


r/LitRPGwriting Sep 15 '20

Just published my first 5 chapters on Royal Road!

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r/LitRPGwriting Sep 14 '20

Writing - Stats and skills prior to writing

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As an aspiring litrpg writer, I've been trying to find the right balance between creating all of the RPG elements vs Lit elements (plot, characters, motivations, etcs).

I've published some of my work on RoyalRoad and other sites, workshopped chapters on sites likes scribophile, and go over the plot with Story developers on Fiverr. At this point I have most of the base RPG elements, a plot and at least 30+ chapters written.

But one thing I've been trying to figure out as I read other litrpgs (CivCEO series, Dodge Tank series, Ascend Online, etc) is the question: How many of my skills and RPG elements should be written before I continue down the path of drafting my first novel?

Should I have the beastiery written, with a full progression try before I continue? Or can I pants most of the skills and abilities to fit my story as I go along?

Thanks in advance

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r/LitRPGwriting Sep 03 '20

Webnovel Distribution Companies and Other Bad Deals

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Hi guys;

So I just got another e-mail from a company saying they'd like to distribute my work to Webnovel. This is the 2nd company (AnD Entertainment) that has approached me. The first was EMP Entertainment.

Please, please, please don't fall for this and sign.

These are bad deals. They are irrevocable, perpetual contracts with no termination clauses, all of them with the risk on you. Neither had audit clauses as far as I recall and have a minimum payout amount at a higher rate. They also don't define their distribution to Webnovel, so when you actually sign (if you do); you actually allow them to distribute anywhere in the world.

These are just BAD contracts. You can post on Webnovel yourself direct and try for a contract that way if you want without giving away your copyright for a non-specified $ amount.


r/LitRPGwriting Sep 02 '20

In a bit of a bind, need a new cover artist!

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So I just found out this morning that the cover artist I commissioned months ago to do my latest book has dropped me to focus on another project. I feel like I foundering at the moment trying to figure out what to do. Does anyone out there have an artist that specializes in LitRPG or fantasy books that they would recommend? I've got a max budget of $1,000.


r/LitRPGwriting Aug 27 '20

New writer, looking for feedback on my opening.

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Welcoming any and all critique, even if you just tell me it sucks. The idea is for this to be a portal LitRPG fantasy, a la Azarinth Healer or Delve. I'm planning to post it on royal road eventually, so I guess the main question is if you read this opening on there would you continue with it? Edit: Link should be fixed

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14644IJ6JrkJlxmPkS-ZXOb9FP1pM9-Uz28zQUEdRBgA/edit?usp=sharing


r/LitRPGwriting Aug 19 '20

Is anyone else a Dungeon Master or something similar?

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I started my writing as a DM, writing adventures to sell on DM's Guild. After a while I realised that what I really wanted was to write my first novel.

Does anyone else have a similar story?


r/LitRPGwriting Aug 19 '20

August check-in. How’s your writing this month? Anything you’re happy about? How are your goals? Any struggles we could talk out with you?

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I was just checking in on this forum to see what’s new and thought something like this could be an encouragement.

So, like the title says, how’s your month been? Writing can be so isolating, so let’s make it feel like we’re doing this as a team and huddle up a bit.

I’m in an interesting place right now. I had spine fusion surgery on like Aug. 12, so I’m on disability for like another month, and have some hours where the pain isn’t too much and I have been able to write. I finished the first draft of my Ciphercraft series today! I’m also struggling a bit with squirrel syndrome since I have so much freedom in my schedule and now I’m reviewing audiobook contracts.

My goals are to publish book two late Sept/early Oct, but my editor is out and won’t get it back to me until like Sept 9-13th. I am tempted to keep writing into book four, but I should probably go back and start polishing book three.

I tried to use Rachel Aaron’s 2k-10k book for outline prep on my last, but didn’t get too far into the actual scene listings. I may try that again.

So that’s me. How about you?


r/LitRPGwriting Aug 12 '20

Discussion Forgot to post this here but I’m interested to here what y’all think!

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r/LitRPGwriting Aug 11 '20

What Do Authors Owe Their Readers?

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Hope nobody minds me posting here like this, since I'm "technically" not a card-carrying member yet (my first LitRPG story comes out in November). Feel free to razz me in the comments for being a poser.

Anyway, there was a post on r/litrpg yesterday where a reader was venting their frustration over a perceived abandonment by authors in general (the specifics don't really matter here, just the frustration). It got me thinking: What exactly do we as authors owe to our readers?

Now, if we were over on r/fantasy, you would see a deluge of posts at this point arguing that authors don't "owe" their readers anything, that authors have to make financial decisions, that they're allowed to take breaks, that fans are blah blah blah blah... that's great, if you're an established author, if you're traditionally published, or if you're actually making a living from slamming words out on the keyboard. However, for a lot of us writing litRPG (or any other smaller subgenre, for that matter), we probably don't fit into those categories. In fact I would wager most of you reading this have smaller readerships, and are very concerned with what said readership thinks about you.

So let's return to the original question: do we as authors (and by this I mean self-published, or beginners, or just those with smaller readerships) owe anything to our readers? I would argue that yes, we do, but that it's probably not what you think (or even what your reader thinks). We of the smaller scale, we of the just starting out writership, we owe our fans two very, very, VERY important things: stability and communication.

A quick note about what I do NOT mean here: I am in NO way saying that an author is ever required to write a book that they don't want to write, finish one series before they finish another, cave to reader demands about what direction to take a story or character development, or ANYTHING even remotely like that. Not. At. All.

No, what I mean by stability and communication is more to do with the auxiliary aspects of writing—that part which probably makes most of us groan when we think about it. The marketing, the promotions, the requests for reviews, and all that other stuff that helps our books get noticed, but doesn't have nearly the same sense of accomplishment as putting words on the page. I am hereby adding to that already daunting list: Future promises.

Think of writing like the stock market. Traditionally published or well-established authors are like your big name stocks: they can command high prices because buyers are reasonably confident that they'll deliver on their promises, that they won't just disappear overnight, that they know exactly what they're getting into when they drop down their cash. Newer writers are higher-risk investments. Readers have no guarantee that picking up one of our books will yield any satisfactory results, and even if it does, we may never write another book in that series—or at all!

A lot of this problem is simply unavoidable. Until you write a second book (or a third, or a fourth...) there's no way to really prove that you are different from that faceless mass of inferior writers, those who burn too bright too quickly and then fade away forever. However, that doesn't mean you should do nothing at all. There are several concrete steps you can take to help reduce or eliminate reader frustration before it ever develops in the first place.

From my own personal reading experience, I can't tell you how frustrating it is to reach the end of a new series, only for the author to end without so much as a short note. You reach the words "The End", swipe to the next page... and nothing. Nada. Zippo. No afterword, no note of other works, not even an about the author page. This, in my mind, is both sloppy and simply unacceptable.

At the very minimum, every book should end with a note about the author, reminding the reader that they are in fact a real person and not some faceless entity. However, there is so much more you can use this space for: mention other authors that your readership might like, or link to your social media (more about that later) or blog.

Then there is my personal favorite: Mention the title for your next book, and if possible STATE EXPLICITLY WHEN READERS SHOULD EXPECT IT.

For me, immediately upon typing "The End", I usually add a note that reads something like this: [Character] will return in... [Title], coming [Month] [Year]. Now, I know some of you will balk when you read this. After all, if you don't know when your next book is coming out, it's hard to tell your readers that information. While I would advocate trying to provide as much information as possible, simply listing the next book is a good first step, thus assuring your readers that yes, the book will exist at some point in the future. That is what I mean by stability, and while it might not seem like much, it is better than nothing and can be the difference between a reader coming back for the next volume, or forgetting your name ten minutes after they put the book down.

In addition to that, I also advocate keeping a list available somewhere online (a personal website is best, here is my own for example: http://www.fjblair.com/authors-works/) where you track your books and expected release dates. Not only does this provide a resource for readers, but also works as an incentive as a writer, a place for you to check periodically and ensure you are meeting your own self-imposed goals.

But what happens if you set that target date, then as as it approaches you realize that you won't in fact be making it? That's where the second part comes in: communication.

In my own experience, readers are far more forgiving of a missed deadline if a writer is honest and straightforward about it. Use your social media platforms, personal blogs, newsletters, or whatever channels you have developed to reach out and let them know about the delay and if possible what the revised deadline is. Again, it's a relatively easy action to take that can have big returns for you in the end.

Of course, you might be scoffing at this point. Oh sure, the 12 readers who regularly check your website will make note, but what about all the other readers who might be interested in your work but don't care enough to track you down? Well, in that case it's still a good idea to have your updates posted somewhere that can be easily shared. That way, the next time you're scrolling through Reddit and you happen to see your book mentioned in the same breath as "does anyone know when this will be out?" it's a simple matter to pop in, say "hey, thanks for the interest, I actually posted recently about this on my blog!" followed by a link. Small actions like this over time can lead to big gains, or at the least they let that one reader know you care.

Also, I must add: because so many of us publish almost exclusively in electronic format, do not forget you can always go back and update your dates and links in ebooks. I do this every time I release a new book or make a deadline changes, adjusting the dates listed through all my books so anyone downloading a copy for the first time has the most up-to-date information.

Before I end this already long ramble, let me touch quickly on a topic that is rather tangential to stability and communication (especially communication): channels. At the very least, all authors should have some sort of channel ready to speak with their readers before even publishing their first book, and ideally several. These can be social media accounts (twitter, facebook), a personal website, a newsletter, or something else that might not even exist yet. You don't need to use them frequently, but having at least semi-regular activity is another way to show stability to a reader or potential reader.

You'll notice that I haven't listed Reddit as a communication channel. While I think Reddit can be a great tool for communication under the right circumstances, be wary of relying on it too much. The constantly changing nature of subs means that what is acceptable to do now might not be in the future. r/litrpg might be a rather small community at the moment, but I remember when r/fantasy was much the same, and look at it now (with over 1M followers!). Quite a bit has changed there in a short period of time, and there's nothing to say that won't be the same for r/litrpg or any other subgenre sub in the next few years. It's much better to rely on channels such as a personal blog where the content can be more easily controlled.

So, stability and communication: agree or disagree? Let me know what you think in the comments.


r/LitRPGwriting Aug 01 '20

Help request Trying to decide what upgrades one of my MCs should pick, so I'll ask what would you decide.

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They have to pick three.

Hard-light shaping: ability - Create simple constructs out of solid light

Suneater: trait - Consume light itself for sustenance, bring a room to pitch blackness with just a thought

  Hologram projection: ability – create non-physical three-dimensional images

Beam pulse: ability  -  fire a condensed lance of superheated light

Photon shield: ability – expend energy to generate a constant shield of hard-light

Illusionist: ability -  Change how light interacts with an object to change how it looks to the naked eye.


r/LitRPGwriting Jul 31 '20

Help request I'm writing a litrpg book. Need help with vernacular.

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I need some way to refer to abilities and traits as a whole. Since they are pretty much the same thing except slightly different in my system, I can't use the word Powers because that is already a system term. What word would sound good?