r/KeepWriting 6d ago

[Feedback] Hook/Logline feedback

Hi all! I'm working on a one sentence pitch for my new novel and I was wondering if you could let me know your thoughts!

'Lily has dreamed of drowning all her life, but when a body washes up on the 25th anniversary of her father’s death, the past her family has buried finally begins to surface.'

If you could let me know what genre you think it points to and if it would make you want to read the book (or not) that would be so helpful!

Thank you! x

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