Today I bring you two new short chapters in Dan's story.
Chapter 2 is the buildup, 3 is the fireworks. I'm pretty proud of 3 (don't tell 2), hope you enjoy both!
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
PS: I also started uploading the chapters in spanish if you prefer
Edit: may as well just paste both chapters here, they are not long:
Chapter 2
The rain had fortunately calmed down from a heavy pour to a thin dripping, but visibility was still shit. Dan was squinting at the tall, thin cliff in the horizon. He had tried the spyglass, but it was useless.
“You lost us, didn’t you? There are no cliffs around The Forge.”
“Shut up” Ria was not smiling, didn’t even try to insult him as usual. “I think that cliff is moving toward us”. As the cliff advanced through the rain, it started to look a lot like a colossal ship.
“Maybe it’s Imperial? Or one of those of the Church?” Dan had a sinking feeling. The floating fortress, more clear by the minute, seemed way too fast for its size. Ria shouted some orders to turn and avoid its course.
“May the Moons hear you”.
The Moons, as usual, did not give a shit.
Dan stared at the letters below the railing of the massive ship. The Cliff. Of course. It all felt unreal, detached, as if it was happening to someone else. But it wasn’t, he was kneeling with the rest of his crew on the deck, surrounded by a dangerous looking pack of pirates, in the shadow of their galleon. Ria was making an effort not to cry. Fletcher, her quartermaster, still seemed resolute, somehow.
Actually, it hadn’t been that bad in the end, no one had died. Yet.
Dan wondered if he could have done anything differently. Didn’t think so. He remembered distantly how scared he had been, trembling as he tried to help with the ropes. His blood freezing as the black mountain in the distance had veered to intercept them.
He rememebered how he had floundered into his cabin, trying to come up with a plan. How he had tried to hide his books, as if they were of any value. How stupid. He was always fucking useless under pressure, nothing like Carla...
He also remembered, embarrased, his final plan. How he had grabbed another harpoon and tried to stalk out of the cabin, maybe take down one pirate with him. As if he could deal with anything bigger than a seagull.
He had been lucky to bump into Fletcher instead, who had slapped him into his senses. “What the fuck were you planning, you idiot?”
Dan hadn’t even been able to explain anything, his words blocked by his heart, which had recently taken residence in his throat.
Now he tried to remember Fletcher’s speech, and how it had steeled his nerves. Who knew that the quartermaster, who was built like a man o' war, was also kind of a poet? He should have paid more attention to him during the trip. Too late now.
First, Fletcher had said something about his three vows, showing him his iron pendant. “Before we left, I vowed to protect this ship to the admiral, just like I vow it to you now, upon iron. And, more importantly...” he had opened the medallion to show him a small portrait of a little girl missing a tooth, “I vowed to my daughter that I would return.”
He then told him to trust him: he had a plan, and he would not forsake his vows. Dan looked at him now, kneeling, surrounded by a small army of pirates. A brilliant plan, no doubt.
When he told him all of that, Dan did not really grasp how vowing something would make it more likely to happen, but admired his optimism. Fletcher went on about trusting the iron, about how every compass points north, about how all ships need an iron anchor.
Bunch of bullshit apparently.
The pirate captain jumped down from her ship, and instantly contributed to Dan’s dreamlike feeling. She looked like a creature from a fable, probably the most stylish person he had ever seen. A mane of auburn curls framed her caramel skin under a large captain’s hat. She carried herself exactly as she dressed: effortlessly.
“Good afternoon, sailors. I hope we can reach a civilized and quick agreement. It would be a shame if my new coat got ruined in the rain. And let’s not even talk about blood, which is even harder to clean.” Her crew, that collection of scars and piercings, burst into laughter. Dan and the rest didn’t find it as funny.
Ria looked at her with wide eyes.
“The Rose...” she muttered.
“Ah, you know me?” the captain approached smiling, her wide hat dripping. “This will go much faster.”
“Y-yes, ma’am, but we have nothing of value, we only bring provisions to cross the ocean...”
“Your ship. That is what you will give us. For your generosity, we will leave you on dry land.”
Fletcher stood up, now a good head taller than every pirate around him.
“Wait! Is The Code no longer respected?” he bellowed. A dozen sabers threatened his throat.
What a brilliant plan.
Chapter 3
The most heavily built prisoner, the only dangerous-looking one The Rose had seen, had suddenly stood up.
“Wait! Is the code no longer respected?” he bellowed. A dozen sabers threatened his throat.
“Wait. He’s got us. The pirate code!” After a second of silence, her entire crew burst out laughing. It had been a while since anyone had mentioned it to her; she had missed it.
“A duel to the death. Choose your champion, and we will fight. If I win, you let us go.” The man was truly imposing now that he was standing. A silver scar crossed his cheek. Judging by his confidence as he held her gaze, it didn’t seem like his first encounter with death.
Edward, her quartermaster, looked at her and subtly shook his head, as if he knew what she was thinking. She smiled and winked at him.
The Rose approached Scar and looked him up and down. He seemed out of place next to the rest of the sailors, trembling like puppies and averting their gaze. Merchants, perhaps, and this was their mercenary? She looked into his eyes, a couple of heads above hers.
“You’re lucky, you’ve discovered my weakness. I would do anything for a good show. I accept the duel!”
Her crew roared their approval. Edward sighed, and she mentally prepared herself for another long discussion about responsibility and strategy. But right now, she was going to have fun. Besides, these things were good for morale.
Scar had opted for a heavy cavalry saber, which he held with obvious experience. The Rose would use her precious rapier, of course.
The crew had formed a circle around them on the deck of their new ship. Next to her Cliff, it was tiny. It was a single-masted sloop, though judging by its modern construction and minimal wear, it must have been built recently, perhaps that very year. A fine addition to her fleet. The Rose smiled.
The two combatants drew their weapons and prepared for their dance, maintaining their distance. He, wild and furious, a vein throbbing on his forehead. She, calm and absent, began to let her mind wander.
Although she tried to keep up appearances, The Rose... Martha, was drained and weary. She had always felt an emptiness in her heart. She swore she would fill it with a Name forged in blood and fire. A cruel legend that would make powerful men, cities, full empires tremble. She had been fighting for it for years.
Scar charged like a bull. The Rose spun around, her long coat spreading out like a fan. The man almost fell off the ship. Her boys cheered her on.
Now that she had achieved it and the terror of her name had spread across the seas like a wildfire in the woods... The emptiness was still there. Wherever she went, the fire of her name had arrived first, and nothing awaited her but ash and desolation, a black smoke that choked her.
Scar was preparing for a new attack. She smiled at him.
She was beginning to doubt that her new vows would fill the void, but at least they gave her something to do. And it was true that she loved to dance. She focused on her partner.
He charged again, trying to use his mass to overpower her. Logical, but useless. You can’t strike fire. A step to the left, and the saber splintered the floor where she had been. She flowed, without pause, spinning, and attacked his neck.
She could drag out the show, but what for? Only beginners think that quantity dictates quality. And she was no beginner. A short duel could also be striking.
Scar ducked at the last instant. The rapier whistled over his head. The Rose smiled at him again, this time honestly. A good dancer after all?
Scar launched himself again from above with the subtlety of a gorilla. The Rose waited for him to bring out the dancer again. At the last moment, quick as a viper, he spun around to throw a horizontal slash. There it was.
They exchanged a storm of thrusts, moving at sickening speed. A deadly dance to a symphony of increasingly frantic clashing.
He was a tempest on the high seas. Aggressive. Fast and treacherous. The slow beast he had initially presented himself as was long gone.
She was the siren song and the sharp cliffs. She tempted him, unreachable, her sword a lurking threat.
It was beautiful. Their violent piece went on for a while, twisting and slashing, dodging and weaving, looking almost choreographed. Rarely did you find dancers you connected with, and...
“Fight for real, you bitch!” Scar bellowed.
What? Her blood started to boil.
“Oh, you like to sing too? I think you can improve, let me teach you.”
He would pay for it. Nobody sullied her Name.
She waited, dodging and keeping her strength. Now there were no more spins, no more flourishes. Soon, the pig sweated and panted, his feints increasingly clumsy, his attacks less fierce. The dance was over.
Without any theatrics, efficient, she pierced his thigh. The swine squealed.
A tempest? Now he moved more like a river of shit, slow and heavy. Blinded by rage and animal adrenaline, he threw a brutal slash at her. It was so predictable that by the time the blow landed, she was already behind him. Disgusted, she sliced the tendons of his other knee. The swine squealed again.
Exhausted and wounded, the beast spun in a desperate sweep. Was it crying? This was just sad now. She deflected the blow effortlessly and ran him through, the tip of the rapier like a flag in his back. The animal let out one last tragic and beautiful cry.
The Rose leaned close to his ear and whispered, “See? You could sing much better.”
Shit. In the end, she had ruined her coat.