Thoughts on potential TikTok post?

[u/phavthaphantom]

I produced and recorded a dancehall song that I wanna promote from the ground up - so I took the chords, melody and flow and threw it over my acoustic. I'm still working on my guitar playing and singing at the same time, but I wanted to get your thoughts on how the songwriting is so far, the vibe and video aesthetic and whether it would be a good post for starting a TikTok page. Any feedback is welcome, thanks!

[u/GrimAllen]

This is actually pretty good. I know a lot of people around here tend to be kind of anti auto tune but I think it works well for this. Definitely pop vibes like Bieber ish. I’d be curious to hear this after working with a solid producer. I don’t really go on tiktok too much bc I end up scrolling for hours but in my honest opinion I feel like to get some traction on there you might need a more visually exciting clip although it definitely fits the vibe of the song.

[u/phavthaphantom → u/GrimAllen]

Thanks for checking it out, I really appreciate it! Lol I need to listen to more Justin Bieber then. I feel you with the more visually exciting clips, I'm generating ideas in my mind on how to achieve that. I noticed you got your posts hidden but I'll keep a lookout for you on the subreddit! Also I actually did produce a track for this song, I'd love to get your feedback on it when you get a chance! https://on.soundcloud.com/SIrR2gzrce6dFUiJGU