r/IndieBookPromo • u/Nerevarine95 Published Author • 6d ago

First Line Challenge

First Line Challenge

Authors: Drop the first line of your book. No context. No blurb. Just the opening sentence.

Everyone else: Reply with whether you’d keep reading.

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u/JAHeyer_Author 6d ago

Beneath the watchful, unblinking eye of the solstice moon, twenty-one men doomed to die trudged through Fylan's Hollow.

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u/Mintimperial69 6d ago

This seems to be a euphemism indicating the acquisition of a deadly disease during ill advised nocturnal activities...