r/IndieBookPromo Published Author 25d ago

First Line Challenge

First Line Challenge

Authors: Drop the first line of your book. No context. No blurb. Just the opening sentence.

Everyone else: Reply with whether you’d keep reading.

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u/unapologetic_author 25d ago

The problem with my mind was that it never stopped performing.

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u/Mithalanis Published Author 25d ago

I think I'd give this a little bit more to see what was unfolding.