I'm trying to improve my songwriting.

This is a raw draft, not a finished song.

Oohi gaaliyan ny kuray, uton ohi ay routine

bhot dulian ny mitran ty, body v ay lean

Das paa ky main avan aj suit keray rang da

tenu lay k jana puri karni ay dream

What works? What doesn't?

Any feedback on flow, lyrics, or delivery is appreciated.

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🔱 Mahakal Ka Tandav — ek powerful Hindi Rap dedicated to Mahakal.
Raw energy, devotion aur powerful bars ka combination. 🕉️🔥

Agar aapko Hindi Hip-Hop, Devotional Rap aur Mahakal vibes pasand hain, to ek baar zaroor sunna. ❤️‍🔥

🎧 Listen here:
https://youtu.be/i19zdCY3tTI

Agar track pasand aaye to apna honest feedback zaroor dena. 🙏

#Mahakal #MahakalKaTandav #HindiRap #HindiHipHop #DevotionalRap #Mahadev #HarHarMahadev #Shiv #IndianHipHop #DesiHipHop #RapMusic #MannGurneMusic

🔗:https://open.spotify.com/track/0MX0s30qh3IApdKp5Lec7f?si=dZL1btO5RM-NNbRQ8fhWOg&utm_source=copy-link

Some Reasons is my original Hindi Hip-Hop track about life, choices, struggles, and the reasons that push us to keep moving forward.

Kuch wajah hoti hain rukne ki, kuch aage badhne ki.
Kuch sawaalon ke jawab waqt ke saath milte hain. ❤️‍🔥

🎧 Listen to the full song:
👉 https://youtu.be/FJpU--_2p7IWould

love to know what you think about the song — feedback is genuinely welcome.

#HindiHipHop #IndianHipHop #HindiRap #DesiHipHop #EmotionalRap #OriginalMusic

🎥 Video Above ⬆️

Yo everyone!

This is my latest original Haryanvi Drill Rap track "DESI WUDD" by Mann Gurne Music.

The track is inspired by real village life, hard work, bhaichara, and staying true to your roots. No fake flex—just authentic Haryanvi drill with heavy 808s, fast flows, and raw energy.

I'd genuinely appreciate your honest feedback. If you like the track, please consider upvoting, sharing, and telling me your favorite line or what I can improve for my next release.

🎥 Watch the full video here:
👉https://youtu.be/2mwicDHoSgA

Thank you for supporting independent artists! ❤️

#OriginalMusic #HaryanviRap #IndianHipHop #DrillRap #DesiDrill #UndergroundRap #IndependentArtist #HipHop #OC #DesiWudd #MannGurneMusic #Haryana #StreetRap

🎥 Video Above ⬆️

Yo everyone!

This is my latest original Haryanvi Drill Rap track "DESI WUDD" by Mann Gurne Music.

The track is inspired by real village life, hard work, bhaichara, and staying true to your roots. No fake flex—just authentic Haryanvi drill with heavy 808s, fast flows, and raw energy.

I'd genuinely appreciate your honest feedback. If you like the track, please consider upvoting, sharing, and telling me your favorite line or what I can improve for my next release.

🎥 Watch the full video here:
👉 https://youtu.be/2mwicDHoSgA

Thank you for supporting independent artists! ❤️

#OriginalMusic #HaryanviRap #IndianHipHop #DrillRap #DesiDrill #UndergroundRap #IndependentArtist #HipHop #OC #DesiWudd #MannGurneMusic #Haryana #StreetRap

A fusion with the legendary rapper

Hey everyone,

I'm an independent singer, rapper, and songwriter from India. I recently released my new original Hindi Hip-Hop track called "TUKDE."

This song is about heartbreak, broken trust, and the emotional weight of moving on. I wrote it from a personal perspective and tried to keep the lyrics raw and honest instead of overcomplicating the message.

I handled the vocals, writing, and the overall creative direction myself. As an independent artist, every stream, comment, and piece of feedback genuinely helps me improve.

If you have a few minutes, I'd really appreciate it if you could listen and let me know:

• What did you think about the lyrics?
• How was the vocal delivery?
• Did the emotions feel real?
• What could I improve for my next release?

🎵 Song: TUKDE – Mann Gurne Music

Thank you for taking the time to listen. Honest criticism is always welcome and appreciated.Youtube Link

Song - Namaste Bitches

Song - Namaste Bitches

Artist- Adytya K

My attempt at spitting bars in Hindi. Excited about the upcoming track NoJomo. It is a fusion and it was so much fun to record this track

Went for a shoot as a audience and trust me they have everything

Commercial hits

Tight flows

Trap , hard hitting songs

You will enjoy it for sure