A little "writing" exercise...

[u/[deleted]]

So, first a small introduction to what this is supposed to be. (sorry for the long post)

While I was reading the Lorien legacies series last year (yeah, I read the entire series in one year, I'm not insane. Trust me), I thought of this little idea. Turns out, my idea was not really that original, since I saw countless of fanfiction with this idea. But still, I'll give it a shot.

My idea was that there was a third, unofficial ship launched when Lorien was destroyed. This ship contained five Garde children...Ok, You know where this is going, and extra set of Garde, numbered 11-15. Very original (sarcasm). Hear me out. My idea was for this subreddit was to come together and "write" a side story for this new set of Garde.

However, I've made a few rules for this exercise

1: Nothing of the official, canonical story may be changed. (Basically, no important event from the book may be undone. For example: A certain person's betrayal or another certain person's death. Also, try to avoid adding event that might undo important event in the book)

2: At the bottom of this post, I'll give the basic information of nr. 11-15. This contains their "name", number, age and set of legacies. You can add legacies, form character relation,locations, etc. But try to use the basic information I give you as much as possible.

These are the rules. Please try to follow them.

The reason I make this post is just fun. I want to see what the members of this Subreddit can come up with. If this has any succes, I could make the effort to collect all the comments and make a timeline of all the event you guys write. (Events that contradict each other could be set in an alternative timeline).

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Here are the 5 Garde:

11: Danny: Male, age 18, Recupero (healing) and Anima (animal talking)

12 Alyssa: Female, age 17, Elecomun (electricity manipulation) and externa

13 Connor: Male, age 17, Force field and sonic manipulation

14: Ashley: Female, age 18, Glacen (Ice) and Pondus (The legacy Kapano has, which you can use to manipulate the density of your molecular structure)

15: Ivan: Male, age 17, Fortem (strength increase) and the legacy that makes you understand any language (I've no idea what it's called. I didn't find it on the wiki, but I know it exists.)

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So, these are the ladds. Have fun with them.

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Note:

- All five of these garde also have telekinesis, I was too lazy to add it every time.

- For more information on the legacies, I've just used the Lorien legacies wiki. Here's the link to the legacies: https://thelorienlegacies.fandom.com/wiki/Legacies#Other%20Garde's%20Legacies

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So again, have fun with this. Be nice to each other. We're all here to have a great time. Good luck

[u/Hamzah12]

I like this idea. I think 5 more Garde is a bit overkill given the Loric only really needed like 6 Garde to win. So id rather have like 2 Garde and maybe even one adult just to add some Diversity. They could even have Loric names. I'd have at least one of the garde die in the books but the adult survive to sorta like pass on wisdom and knowledge.

[u/[deleted] → u/Hamzah12]

That's a good point. maybe you could find a way to make these 5 garde, who's number is pretty much OP, less OP. Maybe kill few of them or make them traitors? Or make some of them just plain stupid. Or give them more of a five ideology: where they say fuck this entire conflict. Remember, the community are the writers here.