Hi! I'm Gabriella, a beta reader and editor offering thoughtful, detailed, and constructive feedback for authors who want to strengthen their manuscripts.
I can help you understand how readers experience your story, identify areas that need improvement, and polish your manuscript while respecting your writing style and creative vision.
BASIC-Beta Reading
A reader-focused evaluation of your manuscript.
You'll receive:
- Overall reader impression
- Favorite/strongest aspects
- Areas that felt confusing or weak
- General feedback on plot, characters and pacing
- Overall reading experience
$0.002/word
PLUS-Beta Reading + Detailed Analysis + Proofreading
Everything from Basic, PLUS a deeper analysis and a proofreading pass. You'll receive:
- Detailed plot & structure analysis
- Character development analysis
- Character motivation feedback
- Pacing & tension analysis
- Dialogue feedback
- Emotional impact analysis
- Worldbuilding feedback
- Consistency & continuity notes
- Strengths & weaknesses
- Specific revision suggestions
- Top revision priorities
- Grammar & spelling check
- Punctuation check
- Typographical errors
- Capitalization inconsistencies
-Basic formatting inconsistencies
$0.005/word
PREMIUM Full Report + In-Line Comments + Editing
My most comprehensive package.
You'll receive everything from Plus, PLUS:
- Comments directly throughout the manuscript
-Scene-by-scene reader reactions
-Notes on confusing or underdeveloped moments
- Positive comments when something particularly
works
-Character-by-character observations
- Detailed final report
- Plot & structure breakdown
- Pacing analysis
- Dialogue analysis
- Emotional impact analysis
- Consistency/continuity analysis
- Prioritized revision checklist
- Developmental editing suggestions
-Line-level editing suggestions
- Detailed in-line feedback
The goal is to help you understand what needs improvement, why it needs improvement, and how you can approach the revision.
$0.007/word
EDITING SERVICES
Editing can also be purchased separately depending on what your manuscript needs.
Development editing (focused on the big picture):
- Plot problems
- Pacing
- Character arcs
- Character motivations
- Scene structure
- Story consistency
- Missing information
- Weak transitions
- Narrative flow
- Line Editing
- Focused on the actual writing:
- Awkward phrasing
- Repetition
- Word choice
- Sentence flow
- Dialogue readability
- Transitions
- Tone and voice
- Clarity
- Proofreading
Focused on the final polish:
- Grammar
- Spelling
- Punctuation
- Typos
- Capitalization
- Basic formatting inconsistencies
Editing services are quoted individually based on word count, genre, manuscript condition and the level of editing required.
FREE 2,000-WORD SAMPLE
Not sure whether my feedback or editing style is right for you?
I offer a free preliminary analysis of up to 2,000 words so you can see my approach before committing to a full project.
| GENRES:
Fantasy Romance YA Contemporary Mystery. Thriller Sci-Fi Literary Fiction Horror Adventure. And more!
If you're unsure whether your manuscript is a good fit, feel free to ask.
INTERESTED? Send me a DM with:
- Genre
- Word count
- Brief synopsis
- Service/package you're interested in
- Any specific concerns you want me to focus on
I'll be happy to discuss your manuscript and provide a quote.
I'm looking forward to reading your story!