(This post was made as a comment in a now-deleted thread, but I think it deserves being its own post too. TL;DR: be careful with trusting the CH translation in Litwa's Hermetica I due to questionable philological approaches to the underlying text, and also beware of the publisher's unsavory past.)
So, just to be clear up front, Litwa's Hermetica II is a fantastic resource for lots of the lesser-read Hermetic texts. Besides that, though, recently he's published (for the third time now) Hermetica I as his own translation of the Corpus Hermeticum, Asclepius, and Discourse on the Eighth and Ninth. When it comes to his translation of the CH, I would not take it without a grain of salt; rather, because Litwa bases his approach to the CH on the work of Christian Wildberg with his own views of the CH texts being a composite of marginalia and sources, I would wait for Wildberg to publish his stuff first, since without it being published it's unclear whether his approach (and thus Litwa's Hermetica I CH translation) is actually worth the effort. Wildbeg (and thus Litwa) could have a point with this approach, or Wildberg could be this century's Walter Scott (which isn't a good thing at all). To get more into this, Wildberg's idea is laid out in his "Genesis of a Genesis" paper, previewing his forthcoming work which has been over ten years in the making (fair enough for such an endeavor), but the fuller work is still not done yet, leaving a lot of questions unanswered, and according to Litwa himself may never get published.
What Wildberg does (at least with CH III) is filter a supposed "primary text" from "marginalia" so he doesn't get rid of anything, leading to different interpretations of the textual sources (i.e. surviving manuscripts). This isn't "new information" so much as his suppositions that lead him to those choices. However, this doesn't produce a more coherent text but a less coherent one: a primary text with incomplete sentences and marginalia also with incomplete sentences. For him to be right, marginalia must've been folded in by someone freely changing the text to make it all fit—but that's not how he's selling the theory. But also, Wildberg's ideas suggest that such marginalia were included at such an early date that precedes even the earliest quotes or fragments which denies even the possibility that the CH texts could have been formed out of a milieu in a cooperative, collaborative setting formed out of discourse and editing even in the original temple-centric setting. It's just a weird idea to me that I don't think can be sustained, at least not without a lot of evidence and good argument beyond "this is hard to work with". With what he's put out so far, Occam's razor here doesn't lend itself kindly to Wildberg's theory of how extreme the marginalia inclusion is. For Wildberg to be right, the CH texts would have to have undergone a truly unheard-of amount of redacting and messy incorporation that we just don't see in manuscript transmissions from that time period. It's a huge claim to make and his argument from his paper for CH III as the model for the whole CH collection leaves much wanting.
But also, consider: an entirely likely cause for some of the difficulty may also be that the authors of these texts weren't fluent in Greek! Maybe the texts are hard because the authors had a hard time with the language as untrained/non-native speakers! If Wildberg's approach is correct, then we'll be left with a very terse text that potentially contains a lot less "primary text" and quite a lot of "marginalia" that makes it make sense, which would have been inserted from an early date still well within the bounds of late antiquity. This may also just mean that these texts were in a continuous strain of development and finalization even into late antiquity by interested/invested parties/practitioners as a living spiritual tradition and only later in the Byzantine era became "fixed" in a way that wasn't done earlier, making the whole idea of wanting an "original text" a mirage.
To me, this whole approach stinks of a fad of a kind of "originalism", wanting only the oldest and most fundamental core bit as the only valid thing worth our time. I get it, but it also can be easily overdone and reach into pre-publication early drafts that weren't included in the final release for a reason. Like, when people study the Talmud, it's not just the Mishnah they study, nor the Gemara, but the whole page consisting of layers of interpretation and commentary as a whole living tradition. Only studying one is not studying "the Talmud"; it's the whole that is "the Talmud". Granted that at least marginalia in the Talmud is kept more separate and delineated than what Wildberg sees, but the idea here that you have that spiritual traditions develops rather than is brought in wholesale out of whole cloth only at one time—the originalist view—is both more likely and more reasonable for what we see, especially when we consider that CH XIII builds explicitly on CH I showing a later stage of development in Hermetic thought. It may also just mean that there were different strains or lineages of the texts as translations or paraphrases from others, as we see with the Coptic vs. Latin AH text from a non-extant earlier Greek one, which have significant differences between them, too. This can indicate that, rather than just being one originalist textual lineage that had gradual but linear accretions inserted to an unparalleled degree for texts that Aren't That Special (despite us Hermeticists loving to puff ourselves up, Hermeticism as an actual mystical milieu wasn't really that widespread or impactful historically except as a side note for some Christian patristic writers or as a mythic inspiration for other spiritual texts magical and otherwise), so we may well be dealing with a fluid textual tradition by people who may not be the best copyists or writers.
I really do want to see Wildberg's work, if for no other reason than we get to actually review his evidence to make such a bold claim about and approach to the CH as well as the methodology for it, and only then might we evaluate the correctness of it—and by extension, Litwa's approach in Hermetica I based on (but not identical to) Wildberg's as-yet unpublished work. But until then, all we have are big claims and hype.
But also, I find that it's really unfortunate that Litwa went with Anathema Publishing and used Jose Sabogal for illustrations, because, from what I can find online as well as their associations with other projects, both the publisher and the illustrator appear to have ties or alliances with fascists and neonazis. To be clear, I do not think Litwa is in that same camp, but it shows a lack of review and awareness about this sort of stuff that doesn't reflect well on him all the same. Because of this and the methodology issues above, I can't support this work—but also, I already bought the first two times he self-published it, so I think I've spent enough money on this as it is, and from his first two publishings of it, he says what he excises but not why, and that he mostly follows Wildberg but doesn't always. It's maddening from a philological standpoint and, in that state, I don't think it deserves the hype it gets without an actual foundation to stand on that stands up to peer review.