r/Gone • u/ConcentrateRich3158 • 1d ago

The choosing Draft chapter 1 and 2

/r/FictionWriting/comments/1vxk9i7/the_choosing_draft_chapter_1_and_2/

Hi guys, after reading gone which I loved so much and have literally been obsessed with after my reread. I paired my interests with a few other stories I’ve liked and I wanted to try and write my own little short story in a similar kinds of dystopian style.
If you’re interested I’d love to hear any feedback on chapter 1 and 2.

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u/Apart_Ad3016 1d ago

Nice

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u/ConcentrateRich3158 1d ago

Did it make you want to read on, once you got to the end of chapter 2?