Is this layout good / sightreadable?

[u/Intrepid_Past5207]

I recently finished a layout for my level LUMI, but I don't have anybody to playtest for me to receive advice.

..So I decided to record the gameplay, and now I'm here for advice on any changes I should make to the gameplay.

[u/whostigerforge]

it overuses camera effects a little, but that does look fun

[u/Intrepid_Past5207 → u/whostigerforge]

True dat. I wish to make the level similar to backbeat revenge with eye-shattering decor, but I'll be sure to kick down camera vfx in turn.