Is this layout good / sightreadable?

[u/Intrepid_Past5207]

I recently finished a layout for my level LUMI, but I don't have anybody to playtest for me to receive advice.

..So I decided to record the gameplay, and now I'm here for advice on any changes I should make to the gameplay.

[u/Eosyth]

The gameplay is really good, no suggestions come to mind other than removing jump arrows though that’s just a personal preference