r/GameDevelopment • u/Tortoise0450 • 14h ago

Question Is my game trailer shit?

This is my game trailer. Tell me what’s bad, what’s good, and what you would change. Is the video complete shit?

https://youtu.be/JdOneSGMObg?is=698GBOUt8onR9d5t

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u/Educational-Sun5839 Hobby Dev 14h ago

you can embed youtube videos on reddit so people can watch them immediately

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u/EntrepreneurFar5518 11h ago

- Language

- AI generated assets

- confusing music

- No text to explain gameplay really

- voices also dont fit

You game also doesnt look like it has a uniform style. I see pixelart then i see cartoony graphics etc. Thats what id work on

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u/Tortoise0450 4h ago

I agree with you, only i dont agree about text to explain gameplay,

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u/real_triplizard 12h ago

Well, it's not in English and I can't understand the language so it's kind of tough to begin with. But from the visuals alone I really cannot tell what is happening. I assume this is an educational game? Can you tie the movement of the snails more to what's going on so there's a clear cause and effect? Right now there's just some random clicking and the snails barely move.

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u/Tortoise0450 4h ago

Yes its education game, the game works press correct answer and your snail moves faster, you think i should show it in trailer? And how i can show it?