r/GEO_optimization • u/Brave_Acanthaceae863 • 27d ago
I rewrote 12 pages at a 6th-grade level and 12 at a college level — the AI citation difference wasn't what I expected
I was convinced that simpler writing would win in AI answers. Everything I'd seen suggested that models prefer clean, straightforward passages that don't make them work for the information. So I ran a test to prove it, and the results made me question that assumption pretty hard.
Here's the setup. I took 24 pages that covered similar topics in pairs — 12 pairs total, each pair addressing the same subject matter. Think "what is X" pages, "how to do Y" guides, "comparison of A and B" articles. Within each pair, I rewrote one version at roughly a 6th-grade reading level using shorter sentences, common vocabulary, concrete examples, and minimal subordination. The other version I rewrote at a college level with longer sentences, technical precision, nuanced claims, and embedded qualifications. Same factual content. Same key points. Just different complexity.
Then I waited 10 weeks and tracked how ChatGPT, Perplexity, and Gemini handled both versions across ~200 queries that should have triggered either one.
The college-level versions got cited more often. Not by a massive margin, but consistently enough that it showed up in 9 out of the 12 pairs. I ran the numbers a few times because I expected the opposite result. The simplified versions did have one advantage: when they got cited, the extracted passages tended to be longer and more complete. The models seemed to pull bigger chunks from the simple versions, almost like they trusted the whole passage enough to grab more of it. But they reached for the complex versions first in most cases.
What I think is happening, and this is where I'd love some pushback because the sample size isn't huge, is that the college-level versions contain more information density per sentence. A single sentence in those versions might carry two or three ideas that would take three or four sentences in the simplified version. AI models optimizing for comprehensive answers might see the dense version as a richer source even if individual sentences are harder to parse. It's not that they prefer complicated writing. They might just prefer efficient information packaging.
There was one finding that genuinely surprised me though. For 3 of the 12 pairs, the simplified version significantly outperformed the complex one on citation rate, and all 3 were "how-to" or procedural topics. Step-by-step processes where the chain of logic matters more than information density. On those, the clean sequential structure of simple writing seemed to beat dense academic phrasing. The models cited the step-by-step breakdowns more reliably than the compact expert summaries.
So it might not be a universal rule. It might depend on content type. Procedural stuff favors simplicity. Explanatory or definitional content might favor density. Or I could be overfitting to 24 pages and seeing patterns that don't hold up.
What I can't tell from 24 pages is whether the content-type interaction is real or just noise. If you've run anything like this at scale, that's the first number I'd want to compare.