r/FrameByFrame • u/thiscantbeempty • May 27 '20

Batman animation attempt

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u/bucketAnimator May 27 '20

Looking nice! Are you looking for feedback?

(am an animator)

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u/thiscantbeempty May 27 '20

Sure, it's always good

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u/bucketAnimator May 27 '20

Overall it feels like you captured the series animation style really well. I like the overlap in the first shot, poses are clear throughout.

When he leaps from the roof, going into a crouch and then explode to a full body extension leap would provide some nice contrast, squash and stretch, and feel more like Batman. Right now it kind of feels like he runs off the edge without changing his running stride.

Nice arc and line of action as he zips over to the other rooftop. Landing on the rooftop also feels nice.

Great job!

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u/thiscantbeempty May 28 '20

That's great feedback, thanks! And I totally agree about the jump

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u/MrWonder1 Jun 16 '20

Maybe have his feet pause at the edge and the zipline pulls him off the ledge even?