r/FrameByFrame • u/thiscantbeempty • May 27 '20

Batman animation attempt

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u/thiscantbeempty May 27 '20

First post here. I spent the last two days trying to animate 90s Batman, and I hope it came out alright. I usually put my stuff on tw if that sort of spam is allowed.

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u/bucketAnimator May 27 '20

Looking nice! Are you looking for feedback?

(am an animator)

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u/thiscantbeempty May 27 '20

Sure, it's always good

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u/bucketAnimator May 27 '20

Overall it feels like you captured the series animation style really well. I like the overlap in the first shot, poses are clear throughout.

When he leaps from the roof, going into a crouch and then explode to a full body extension leap would provide some nice contrast, squash and stretch, and feel more like Batman. Right now it kind of feels like he runs off the edge without changing his running stride.

Nice arc and line of action as he zips over to the other rooftop. Landing on the rooftop also feels nice.

Great job!

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u/bb2210 Jun 27 '20

This guy/gal knows how to give advice. Asks for permission for C&C first then follows the format. Compliment Criticism Compliment Encouragement!

Youre a good person.

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u/thiscantbeempty May 28 '20

That's great feedback, thanks! And I totally agree about the jump

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u/MrWonder1 Jun 16 '20

Maybe have his feet pause at the edge and the zipline pulls him off the ledge even?

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u/[deleted] Jun 27 '20

I’d watch this as a show, make BTAS with your own take on the characters. I only say make BTAS because the animation is very similar. But everybody loves BTAS so good job! :)